Dec. 9, 2023
The most risky thing I have ever done
When I was seventeen years old, I joined a three-day-long summer camp in the middle of Taiwan and met two good friends who were around my age, one girl and one boy. They both were from Taipei. We had a good time together, so they invited me to come to Taipei to hang out with them for one more day. The boy said the girl and I could stay at his home for one night. I was too eager to visit Taipei, so I lied to my parents and said the camp actually lasted for four days and headed towards Taipei with my new friends. I don't remember where we went since it was a long time ago. When the night was coming, the girl told me that she couldn't accompany me to stay at that boy's home. I didn't know how to deal with this situation, so I just followed the boy to his house. His parents saw me and welcomed me without surprise. It seemed that their son bringing kids back was a frequent occurrence. The mother asked his son to bring a pillow and cover for me and left the room. I was terrified to find out that I had to stay in the same room with the boy. Fortunately, nothing happened that night. I was lucky that my new friend was a teenager with high integrity.
The most risky thing I have ever done
When I was seventeen years old, I joined a three-day-long summer camp in the middle of Taiwan and met / made two good friends who were around my age, one girl and one boy.
“Met” is OK, but “made” is better since they presumably were NEW friends (you didn’t know them before you met them at the camp).
They both were from Taipei.
We had a good time together, so they invited me to come to Taipei to hang out with them for one more day.
The boy said the girl and I could stay at his home for one night.
I was too eager to visit Taipei, so I lied to my parents and said the camp actually lasted for four days and headed towards Taipei with my new friends.
I don't remember where we went since it was a long time ago.
When the night was coming, the girl told me that she couldn't accompany me to staystay with me at that boy's home.
I didn't know how to deal with this situation, so I just followed the boy to his house.
His parents saw me and welcomed me without surprise.
It seemed that their son bringing kids back was a frequent / common occurrence.
“Common” is more idiomatic here.
The mother asked his son to bring a pillow and cover for me and left the room.
I was terrified to find (out) / realize that I had to stay in the same room with / as the boy.
Fortunately, nothing happened that night.
I was lucky that my new friend was a teenager with high integrity.
Feedback
I’m guessing you must be female?
When I was seventeen years old, I joined a three-day-long summer camp in the middle of Taiwan and met two good friends who were around my age, one girl and one boy.
They both were from Taipei.
We had a good time together, so they invited me to come to Taipei to hang out with them for one more day.
The boy said the girl and I could stay at his home for one night.
I was too eager to visit Taipei, so I lied to my parents and said the camp actually lasted for four days and headed towards Taipei with my new friends.
I don't remember where we went since it was a long time ago.
When the night was comingcame, the girl told me that she couldn't accompany me to stay at that boy's home.
I didn't know how to deal with this situation, so I just followed the boy to his house.
His parents saw me and welcomed me without any surprise.
It seemed that their son bringing kids back was a frequent occurrencfrequently brought kids back home.
The mother asked his son to bring a pillow and coverblankets for me and left the room.
I was terrified to find out that I had to stay in the same room with the boy.
Fortunately, nothing happened that night.
I was lucky that my new friend was a teenager with high integrity.
Feedback
That IS risky!
|
The most risky thing I have ever done This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When I was seventeen years old, I joined a three-day-long summer camp in the middle of Taiwan and met two good friends who were around my age, one girl and one boy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! When I was seventeen years old, I joined a three-day-long summer camp in the middle of Taiwan and met / made two good friends who were around my age, one girl and one boy. “Met” is OK, but “made” is better since they presumably were NEW friends (you didn’t know them before you met them at the camp). |
|
They both were from Taipei. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
We had a good time together, so they invited me to come to Taipei to hang out with them for one more day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The boy said the girl and I could stay at his home for one night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I was too eager to visit Taipei, so I lied to my parents and said the camp actually lasted for four days and headed towards Taipei with my new friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I don't remember where we went since it was a long time ago. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When the night was coming, the girl told me that she couldn't accompany me to stay at that boy's home. When the night When |
|
I didn't know how to deal with this situation, so I just followed the boy to his house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
His parents saw me and welcomed me without surprise. His parents saw me and welcomed me without any surprise. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
It seemed that their son bringing kids back was a frequent occurrence. It seemed that their son It seemed that their son bringing kids back was a frequent / common occurrence. “Common” is more idiomatic here. |
|
The mother asked his son to bring a pillow and cover for me and left the room. The mother asked his son to bring a pillow and This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I was terrified to find out that I had to stay in the same room with the boy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I was terrified to find (out) / realize that I had to stay in the same room with / as the boy. |
|
Fortunately, nothing happened that night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I was lucky that my new friend was a teenager with high integrity. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium