May 5, 2025
The Most Beautiful Kind of Flowers I Came across Yesterday
Yesterday, I went to a big park near my home. It's called Century Park.
I took a video of corn poppies, the most beautiful kind of flowers I came across yesterday.
You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY
I encountered some music problems when uploading the video, so I exchanged the original music for YouTube's free music.
昨天，我去了我家附近的一个大公园。它叫世纪公园。
我拍了一段虞美人的视频，它是我昨天遇到的最美丽的一种花。
你可以在这里看到：https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY
我在上传视频的时候遇到了一些音乐问题，所以我把原来的音乐换成了YouTube的免费音乐。
The Most Beautiful Kind of Flowers I Came aAcross Yesterday
Yesterday, I went to a big park near my home.
It's called Century Park.
I took a video of corn poppies, the most beautiful kind of flowers I came across yesterday.
"Kind of flowers" sounds a bit awkward. "Most beautiful flowers" is clearer and more natural.
You can seewatch it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY
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"Watch" is more natural when referring to a video, compared to "see." "Had some issues with" is a more natural way to describe problems. "Replaced" sounds better than "exchanged" when talking about swapping music.
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You did a great job! Keep it up!
May 5, 2025
Thank you so much!
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The Most Beautiful Kind of Flowers I Came aAcross Yesterday
Yesterday, I went to a big park near my home.
It's called Century Park.
I took a video of corn poppies,: the most beautiful kind of flowers I came across yesterday.
You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY I encountered some music problems when uploading the video, so I exchanged the original music for YouTube's free music.
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Very pretty flowers.
May 5, 2025
Thank you!
Have a nice day!
The Most Beautiful Kind of Flowers I Came aAcross Yesterday
If you want to capitalise every word, do be consistent. (No need to capitalise "of" though, since it's a short preposition.) "Flowers" should also be singular.
Yesterday, I went to a big park near my home.
It's called Century Park.
I took a video of corn poppies, the most beautiful kind of flowers I came across yesterday.
You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY
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I encountered some music problems when uploading the video, so I exchangswitched the original music for YouTube's free music.
"exchanged" has the meaning of "give and take", but there's no giving here, so "switched" would be a better word to use.
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Cool flowers. There's beauty in their simplicity.
May 5, 2025
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day!
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You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY I encountered some music problems when uploading the video, so I exchanged the original music for YouTube's free music. You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/5n4eGYHJGSY "exchanged" has the meaning of "give and take", but there's no giving here, so "switched" would be a better word to use. This sentence has been marked as perfect! You can "Watch" is more natural when referring to a video, compared to "see." "Had some issues with" is a more natural way to describe problems. "Replaced" sounds better than "exchanged" when talking about swapping music. |
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