March 18, 2021
The Moon over the Mountain
"The Moon over the Mountain" is one of the great literary works that I learned in high school. A man is very smart and likes to make poems. He passes a difficult imperial exam in ancient China but can't give up his dream of being a great poet. However, his dream is broken so he finally goes mad and turns into a brutal tiger. After a while, he meets his old friend and tells his poems and regrets. He says the reason he was changed into a tiger is his timid conceit and majestic shame. I partly sympathize with him and admonish myself from his confession.
The Moon oOver the Mountain
In English, the first letter of all verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title.
"The Moon oOver the Mountain" is one of the greabest literary works that I lrearned in high school.
In English, the first letter of all verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., needs to be capitalized in proper nouns, like book titles.
A man is very smart and likes to make poems.
He passes a difficult imperial exam in ancient China, but can't give uplet go of his dream of being a great poet.
However, his dream is brokens are shattered, so he finally goes mad and turns into a brutal tiger.
After a while, he meets his old friend and tells him his poems ands well as regrets.
He says the reason he was changed into a tiger iwas his timid conceit and majesticgreat shame.
"Timid conceit" and "majestic shame" are oxymorons.
I partlycan somewhat sympathize with him and I admonish myself fromabout my actions based on his confession.
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March 19, 2021
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The Moon over the Mountain The Moon In English, the first letter of all verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., needs to be capitalized in the title. |
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"The Moon over the Mountain" is one of the great literary works that I learned in high school. "The Moon In English, the first letter of all verbs, adverbs, adjetives, etc., needs to be capitalized in proper nouns, like book titles. |
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A man is very smart and likes to make poems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He passes a difficult imperial exam in ancient China but can't give up his dream of being a great poet. He passes a difficult imperial exam in ancient China, but can't |
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However, his dream is broken so he finally goes mad and turns into a brutal tiger. However, his dream |
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After a while, he meets his old friend and tells his poems and regrets. After a while, he meets his old friend and tells him his poems a |
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He says the reason he was changed into a tiger is his timid conceit and majestic shame. He says the reason he was changed into a tiger "Timid conceit" and "majestic shame" are oxymorons. |
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I partly sympathize with him and admonish myself from his confession. I |
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