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yaw

Feb. 7, 2023

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the moon

one once the month the moon is beautiful because she sparkle everything sky, the moon don't have own daylight, she reflation the light sun, around the moon exists a lot the myths about legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

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the moon

one oOnce thea month, the moon is beautiful because sheit sparkles everything sky, tin the sky. The moon doesn't have it's own daylight, she reflation the light sun, a; It reflects the light of the sun. Around the moon exists a lot theof myths about old legends old, from the werewolves, to portals, to other dimensions.

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Good! Just a few errors, but no worries.

the moon

one oOnce thea month the moon is beautiful because sheit sparkle everythings in the sky, t
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he moon don't have owncreate its daylight, she reflation the light sun, ait only reflects the light of the sun.¶
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rounding the moon existsthere are a lot the myths aboutnd legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

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Very poetic writing. While I like calling the moon a "she", it is quite unusual to gender objects in English.

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yaw

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thanks for you help!!!!

tThe moon

one oOnce thea month the moon is beautiful because she sparkles everythingwhere in the sky, t. The moon doesn't have its own daylight, so she reflationects the light sun, around the moon exists afrom the sun. A lot theof myths aboutnd old legends old,exist around the moon from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

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Pretty story. Good work!

one oOnce thea month, the moon is beautiful because she sparkle everything sky_____, the moon doesn't have its/her own daylight, . It/she reflationects the light sun, aof the sun. Around the moon exists a lot theof myths about old legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

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one once the month the moon is beautiful because she sparkle everything sky, the moon don't have own daylight, she reflation the light sun, around the moon exists a lot the myths about legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.


one oOnce thea month, the moon is beautiful because she sparkle everything sky_____, the moon doesn't have its/her own daylight, . It/she reflationects the light sun, aof the sun. Around the moon exists a lot theof myths about old legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

one oOnce thea month the moon is beautiful because she sparkles everythingwhere in the sky, t. The moon doesn't have its own daylight, so she reflationects the light sun, around the moon exists afrom the sun. A lot theof myths aboutnd old legends old,exist around the moon from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

one oOnce thea month the moon is beautiful because sheit sparkle everythings in the sky, t
T
he moon don't have owncreate its daylight, she reflation the light sun, ait only reflects the light of the sun.¶
Sur
rounding the moon existsthere are a lot the myths aboutnd legends old, from the werewolves to portals to other dimensions.

one oOnce thea month, the moon is beautiful because sheit sparkles everything sky, tin the sky. The moon doesn't have it's own daylight, she reflation the light sun, a; It reflects the light of the sun. Around the moon exists a lot theof myths about old legends old, from the werewolves, to portals, to other dimensions.

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