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The Mood Before Holiday

It's New Year the day after tomorrow. We're really excited! Many people are already not in the working mood. Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, they've been glued to their workstations with a document open for ages. I think maybe they are thinking about where and with who to celebrate the NewYear's eve. What's more, some people have clustered together and are whispering about their holidays.

I am faking work too, writing this diary with my smartphone, lol.

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The Mood Before the Holiday

alternative: Pre-holiday Mood

It's {New Year's Day | the New Year} the day after tomorrow.

We're really excited!

Many people are already not in the working mood.

suggestion: Many people are already not in the mood to work.

Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, ---they've been glued to their workstations with a document open for ages.

I think maybe they are thinking about where and with whom to celebrate the New Year's eEve.

What's more, some people have clustered together and are whispering about their holidays.

I am faking work too, writing this diary entry with my smartphone, lol.

A diary is a collection / book of diary entries.

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Does your holiday start at the end of the 30th, or of the 31st? Many Americans have to work on the 31st.

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From January 1st to 3rd. But many people like to take one or two days off, so they can enjoy a longer connective holiday.

The Mood Before Holiday

It's New Year the day after tomorrow.

We're really excited!

Many people are already not in the working mood.

"a" working mood is better in this situation, but your sentence is not wrong.

Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, they've been glued to their workstations with a document opened for ages.

While you are describing the present, the document was opened in the past relative to that time.

I think maybe they are thinking about where and with whom to celebrate the New Year's eve.

What's more, some people have clustered together and are whispering about their holidays.

I am faking work too, writing this diary with my smartphone, lol.

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LOL, just as I am commenting on people's diary. Might as well just let us have a longer holiday, wouldn't you say?

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Absolutely agree with you,lol

The Mood Before Holiday


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The Mood Before the Holiday

alternative: Pre-holiday Mood

It's New Year the day after tomorrow.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's {New Year's Day | the New Year} the day after tomorrow.

We're really excited!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Many people are already not in the working mood.


Many people are already not in the working mood.

"a" working mood is better in this situation, but your sentence is not wrong.

Many people are already not in the working mood.

suggestion: Many people are already not in the mood to work.

Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, they've been glued to their workstations with a document open for ages.


Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, they've been glued to their workstations with a document opened for ages.

While you are describing the present, the document was opened in the past relative to that time.

Most of my coworkers are pretending to be working, ---they've been glued to their workstations with a document open for ages.

I think maybe they are thinking about where and with who to celebrate the NewYear's eve.


I think maybe they are thinking about where and with whom to celebrate the New Year's eve.

I think maybe they are thinking about where and with whom to celebrate the New Year's eEve.

What's more, some people have clustered together and are whispering about their holidays.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am faking work too, writing this diary with my smartphone, lol.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am faking work too, writing this diary entry with my smartphone, lol.

A diary is a collection / book of diary entries.

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