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The Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci

The Mona Lisa by Leonard da Vinci is probably the most famous painting of all time. Should it be? In your opinion, does it live up to the hype?

I think the real question isn't whether the Mona Lisa should be the most famous painting in the world, but why it is so. Surely, there aren't enough reasons to say why one good painting is better than another. There are just two kinds of artworks, which are good and which are bad. No more than that. The special importance that a painting could have is determined by the mythology that the art world creates around it; arguably, one can even say that some feelings that an artwork causes in its public (consider the conceptual art) respond to the same reason. The people rush into the Louvre as the people rush into a church that guard a special and saint object. What there are looking for isn't the painting with its real features, but the mythical irrational story that the painting embodies. Walter Benjamin, the German philosopher, talked about the "Aura" of the objects of art, with that term he signified the unique presence of the object, the Aura resides in the impossibility that an artwork has to be reproduced exactly the same. Even in the best copy there is something missing. The Mona Lisa is probably the most reproduced image in the world, but the people still peregrinate to the original. When we love something, we want its presence, its Aura. But, where does the fascination with the Mona Lisa come from? There should a lot of historical events that transfigured a simple portrait into an iconic image. It's this web of little facts which push the people towards the Mona Lisa. Now, when discussing its importance, we just add fuel to the fire.

The Mona Lisa live up to the hype, as long as the expectations are to see a simple painting. There is less possibility of fascination when something is deformed by the burden of exaggerated claims about itself.

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The Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci

The Mona Lisa by Leonard da Vinci is probably the most famous painting of all time.

Should it be?

In your opinion, does it live up to the hype?

I think the real question isn't whether the Mona Lisa should be the most famous painting in the world, but why it is so.

Surely, there aren't enough reasons to say why one good painting is better than another.

There are just two kinds of artworks,: those which are good and those which are bad.

In American English, it should be "that" instead of "which."

No more than that.

The special importance that a painting could have is determined by the mythology that the art world creates around it; a. Arguably, one can even say that some feelings that an artwork causes in its public (consider the conceptual art) respond to the same reasonthis also accounts for the public's perceptions of and feelings about art (for example, positive reactions to conceptual art).

The pPeople rush into the Louvre as the peoplesame way they rush into a church that guards a special and saint object.

What there are looking for isn't the painting with it's real features, but the mythical, irrational story that ithe painting embodies.

Walter Benjamin, tThe German philosopher, Walter Benjamin talked about the "Aura" of the objects of art, with that term he signified the unique presence of the object, thea term describing the object's unique presence. An artwork's Aura resides in the impossibility that an artworkit has to be reproduced exactly the same.

Even in the best copy, there is something missing.

More concise: Even in the best copy, something is missing.

The Mona Lisa is probably the most reproduced image in the world, but the people still peregrinateflock to to the original.

"Peregrinate" sounds odd here.

When we love something, we want its presence, its Aura.

But, where does the fascination with the Mona Lisa come from?

There shouldare a lot of historical events that transfigured a simple portrait into an iconic image.

It's this web of little facts whichthat push thes people towards the Mona Lisa.

Now, when discussing its importance, we just add fuel to the fire.

The Mona Lisa live up to the hype, as long as the expectations are to see a simple painting.

There is less possibility of fascination when something is deformed by the burden of exaggerated claims about itself.

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basiliomagno

July 18, 2021

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Thank you so much!! This is very helpful.

The Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci


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The Mona Lisa by Leonard da Vinci is probably the most famous painting of all time.


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Should it be?


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In your opinion, does it live up to the hype?


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I think the real question isn't whether the Mona Lisa should be the most famous painting in the world, but why it is so.


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Surely, there aren't enough reasons to say why one good painting is better than another.


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There are just two kinds of artworks, which are good and which are bad.


There are just two kinds of artworks,: those which are good and those which are bad.

In American English, it should be "that" instead of "which."

No more than that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The special importance that a painting could have is determined by the mythology that the art world creates around it; arguably, one can even say that some feelings that an artwork causes in its public (consider the conceptual art) respond to the same reason.


The special importance that a painting could have is determined by the mythology that the art world creates around it; a. Arguably, one can even say that some feelings that an artwork causes in its public (consider the conceptual art) respond to the same reasonthis also accounts for the public's perceptions of and feelings about art (for example, positive reactions to conceptual art).

The people rush into the Louvre as the people rush into a church that guard a special and saint object.


The pPeople rush into the Louvre as the peoplesame way they rush into a church that guards a special and saint object.

What there are looking for isn't the painting with its real features, but the mythical irrational story that the painting embodies.


What there are looking for isn't the painting with it's real features, but the mythical, irrational story that ithe painting embodies.

Walter Benjamin, the German philosopher, talked about the "Aura" of the objects of art, with that term he signified the unique presence of the object, the Aura resides in the impossibility that an artwork has to be reproduced exactly the same.


Walter Benjamin, tThe German philosopher, Walter Benjamin talked about the "Aura" of the objects of art, with that term he signified the unique presence of the object, thea term describing the object's unique presence. An artwork's Aura resides in the impossibility that an artworkit has to be reproduced exactly the same.

Even in the best copy there is something missing.


Even in the best copy, there is something missing.

More concise: Even in the best copy, something is missing.

The Mona Lisa is probably the most reproduced image in the world, but the people still peregrinate to the original.


The Mona Lisa is probably the most reproduced image in the world, but the people still peregrinateflock to to the original.

"Peregrinate" sounds odd here.

When we love something, we want its presence, its Aura.


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But, where does the fascination with the Mona Lisa come from?


But, where does the fascination with the Mona Lisa come from?

There should a lot of historical events that transfigured a simple portrait into an iconic image.


There shouldare a lot of historical events that transfigured a simple portrait into an iconic image.

It's this web of little facts which push the people towards the Mona Lisa.


It's this web of little facts whichthat push thes people towards the Mona Lisa.

Now, when discussing its importance, we just add fuel to the fire.


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The Mona Lisa live up to the hype, as long as the expectations are to see a simple painting.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is less possibility of fascination when something is deformed by the burden of exaggerated claims about itself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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