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alisiah

Sept. 18, 2020

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the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes

Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I can understand why increasing the minimum legal age for driving can reduce driving accidents and driving offenses and increase rode safety because of some reasons, but I do not think among possible solutions this is the best. I think that since the youth are energetic, some of them see driving faster than a limit speed a means of relieving their stress and energy. They are looking for exciting activities much more than older people. In addition, Younger people are usually less mature and less responsible for their manners. Due to the lack of experience, young individuals do not have good enough awareness of the importance of following the laws, and that is why young individuals tend more to break the rules in comparison to older people.
However, authorities can come up with other solutions to the issue of road safety. For instance, heavier fines and stricter punishments can be enacted for driving offenders. Governments should spend public money on educating individuals on the necessity of following the rules and developing a high driving culture. They can encourage people to commute by public transport rather than private vehicles.
In conclusion, although increasing the minimum legal age is useful in reducing the driving offenses but other solutions are more effective in ensuring road safety.

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Increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikesdriving age

Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is not necessary.

I can understand why increasing the minimum legal age for driving age can reduce driving accidents and driving offenses, ands well as increaseing roade safety because of some reasons, but
I do not think among possible solutionsnecessarily think this is the best. solution.¶

I think that since the youth are energetic, some of them seen general, youth tend to drivinge faster than a limit speed a means ofthe speed limit as a way to relievinge their stress and energy.

Don’t use energy twice.

In addition, Yyounger people are usuallytend to be less mature and less responsible for their manneractions.

Due to the lack of experience, young individualsFurthermore, young people do not have good enough awareness of the importance of following the laws, and that is why young individualsthey tend more to break the rules in comparison tomore often than older people.

However, authoritiesThat is why I feel we can come up with other solutions to the issue ofaddress road safety.

For instance, we can impose heavier fines and stricter punishments can be enacted for driving offenders.

Governments should spendWe could dedicate more public moneyfunds on educating individuals on the necessity of following the rules and developing a high driving culture.and encouraging young people to be law abiding.

I don’t know what you mean by high driving culture

TheyWe can also encourage people to commute byeveryone to use public transport rather thanation versus private vehicles.

In conclusion, althourather than an outright increasinge to the minimum legal age is useful in reducing the driving offenses but other solutions are more effective in ensuring road safetydriving age, we should consider these other solutions mentioned above, which could prove to be more effective.

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alisiah

Sept. 19, 2020

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I'd greatly appreciate it. That was so helpful.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is not necessary.

the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes


Increasing the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikesdriving age

Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes.


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I can understand why increasing the minimum legal age for driving can reduce driving accidents and driving offenses and increase rode safety because of some reasons, but I do not think among possible solutions this is the best.


I can understand why increasing the minimum legal age for driving age can reduce driving accidents and driving offenses, ands well as increaseing roade safety because of some reasons, but
I do not think among possible solutionsnecessarily think this is the best. solution.¶

I think that since the youth are energetic, some of them see driving faster than a limit speed a means of relieving their stress and energy.


I think that since the youth are energetic, some of them seen general, youth tend to drivinge faster than a limit speed a means ofthe speed limit as a way to relievinge their stress and energy.

Don’t use energy twice.

They are looking for exciting activities much more than older people.


In addition, Younger people are usually less mature and less responsible for their manners.


In addition, Yyounger people are usuallytend to be less mature and less responsible for their manneractions.

Due to the lack of experience, young individuals do not have good enough awareness of the importance of following the laws, and that is why young individuals tend more to break the rules in comparison to older people.


Due to the lack of experience, young individualsFurthermore, young people do not have good enough awareness of the importance of following the laws, and that is why young individualsthey tend more to break the rules in comparison tomore often than older people.

However, authorities can come up with other solutions to the issue of road safety.


However, authoritiesThat is why I feel we can come up with other solutions to the issue ofaddress road safety.

For instance, heavier fines and stricter punishments can be enacted for driving offenders.


For instance, we can impose heavier fines and stricter punishments can be enacted for driving offenders.

Governments should spend public money on educating individuals on the necessity of following the rules and developing a high driving culture.


Governments should spendWe could dedicate more public moneyfunds on educating individuals on the necessity of following the rules and developing a high driving culture.and encouraging young people to be law abiding.

I don’t know what you mean by high driving culture

They can encourage people to commute by public transport rather than private vehicles.


TheyWe can also encourage people to commute byeveryone to use public transport rather thanation versus private vehicles.

In conclusion, although increasing the minimum legal age is useful in reducing the driving offenses but other solutions are more effective in ensuring road safety.


In conclusion, althourather than an outright increasinge to the minimum legal age is useful in reducing the driving offenses but other solutions are more effective in ensuring road safetydriving age, we should consider these other solutions mentioned above, which could prove to be more effective.

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