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Dec. 23, 2022

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The Mind Explain(1)

A short Summary of the first episode:

The memories in our minds are unreliable.
Emotions are fundamental to enhance the possibility of clear, vivid memories.
The more vastly impact we have received, the more long time the memories stay.
People who are great at short-term memories tend to translate unfamiliar numbers or other elements into pictures, and stories and put them in the memory palace.
Those pictures and stories will be positioned in their familiar spaces.
Scientists demonstrated that space and direction can be helpful when we try to remember things.

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The Mind Explained(1)

"An Explanation of the Mind" can also work I think.

The memories in our minds are unreliable.

Emotions are fundamental to enhance the possibilityincrease the amount of clear, vivid memories.

The more vastlylarger the impact we have received, the more long timelonger the memories stay.

People who are great at short-term memories tend to translate unfamiliar numbers or other elements into pictures, and stories and put, storing them in their memory palace.

I tried to reduce the usage of "and" here. What do you mean by "memory palace?" Where memories are stored perhaps?

Those pictures and stories will be positioned in their familiar spaces.

Gramattically correct. However, I am not entirely sure what this sentence is trying to say.

Scientists demonstrated that space and direction can be helpful when we try to remember things.

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The Mind Explain(1)


The Mind Explained(1)

"An Explanation of the Mind" can also work I think.

A short Summary of the first episode:


The memories in our minds are unreliable.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Emotions are fundamental to enhance the possibility of clear, vivid memories.


Emotions are fundamental to enhance the possibilityincrease the amount of clear, vivid memories.

The more vastly impact we have received, the more long time the memories stay.


The more vastlylarger the impact we have received, the more long timelonger the memories stay.

People who are great at short-term memories tend to translate unfamiliar numbers or other elements into pictures, and stories and put them in the memory palace.


People who are great at short-term memories tend to translate unfamiliar numbers or other elements into pictures, and stories and put, storing them in their memory palace.

I tried to reduce the usage of "and" here. What do you mean by "memory palace?" Where memories are stored perhaps?

Those pictures and stories will be positioned in their familiar spaces.


Those pictures and stories will be positioned in their familiar spaces.

Gramattically correct. However, I am not entirely sure what this sentence is trying to say.

Scientists demonstrated that space and direction can be helpful when we try to remember things.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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