Jan. 22, 2020
The Meaning of Life
We can’t avoid illness and death.
This Monday, my uncle passed away after a long struggle with his disease.
I heard my uncle seemed to be smiling after his heart stopped.
He was really a gentle and calm person.
May he rest in peace.
I’m thinking about what I can do for others in my life.
I really want to help the people who need it.
That’s the meaning of my life.
(corrected on Jan. 22nd)
私たちは病気や死を避けられません。
今週の月曜、私のおじは長い闘病生活を経て亡くなりました。
心臓が止まってから、おじは笑ったような顔をしていたと聞きました。
おじはとても優しく穏やかな人でした。
ご冥福をお祈りします。
自分の人生で、私は他の人に何ができるのだろうかと考えています。
私は助けを必要とする人の助けになりたい。
それが私の生きる意味です。
I heard that my uncle seemed to behave been smiling after his heart stopped.
He was a really a gentle and calm person.
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Your writing is excellent. My only corrections weren't super important as the passages were clear either way.
I am sorry about your uncle's passing. It is so hard to lose a loved one. You seem to have wonderful goals. I wish you the best! 💙
Jan. 23, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Oh, this journal has rewritten after Jet and Bees gave corrections.
So it’s because of their efforts. ;)
Thanks for your kind words as well!
I’ll try to do my best for myself, it means to fulfill my heart with happiness.☺️💕
I really want to help the people who need it.
It’s fine without “the,” but I think it sounds just a little more natural.
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May he rest in peace. I’m sorry for your loss.
Jan. 22, 2020
Thank you for the correction and your kind word.
My mother went to his funeral and she said it was really impressive one.
My uncle’s family and his relatives were so kind. They also talked about something funny story about him.
The Meaning of Life
We can’t avoid illness and death.
This Monday, my uncle passed away after a long struggle with his disease.
I heard my uncle seemed to be smiling after his heart stopped.
He was a really a gentle and calm person.
May he rest in peace.
I’m thinking about what I can do for others in my life.¶
OR:¶
I'm thinking about what I can do for others [during my lifetime]
I really want to help the people who need it[help].
That’s [will be] the meaning of my life.
正しくないわけではないですが、きょうこさんはこれから人をもっと手伝いますね？
Jan. 24, 2020
Thank you for the correction !
That will be... と書いても良かったのですね！
ありがとうございます、勉強になりました😊🙏🏻
The Meaning of Life
We can’t avoid illness and death.
This Monday, my uncle has passed away after a long struggle againstwith his disease.
I heard my uncle looked like hseemed to be smileding after his heart stopped.
He was really a gentle and calm person.
May he rest in peace.
I’m thinking about what I can do for others in my life.
I really want to help people who need helpit.
That’s the meaning of my life.
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Sorry for your loss :(
Jan. 22, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
We were preparing for his loss the day before he passed away.
It’s really sad, but we accept it and move on.
His smile is always with us. :)
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