Jan. 16, 2025
The man and your yard
The man watches your yard. He looked and perceived that is empty and not has colorful. He goes to the shop to get something flowers to your yard. He comes back to your house and put your new flowers in your yard. Now it is very beautiful
The man and your yard
The man watcheslooks at your yard.
Watching is a continuous action, based off the context "to look" is a more suitable verb.
He looked and perceivnoticed that it is empty and not has colorful.
I removed the word "perceived" because it doesn't fit the context, and added the word "it" because the sentence need a subject.
He goes to the shop to get something flowers tofor your yard.
He comes back to your house and put yours the new flowers ion your yard.
Jan. 16, 2025
Just a comment on skamiikaze’s correction, “in your yard” sounds correct to me and “on” sounds wrong to my ears as an American.
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The man and your yard The man and your yard |
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The man watches your yard. The man Watching is a continuous action, based off the context "to look" is a more suitable verb. |
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He looked and perceived that is empty and not has colorful. He looked and I removed the word "perceived" because it doesn't fit the context, and added the word "it" because the sentence need a subject. |
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He goes to the shop to get something flowers to your yard. He goes to the shop to get some |
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He comes back to your house and put your new flowers in your yard. He comes back to your house and put |
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Now it is very beautiful |
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