Nov. 18, 2022
The little train from Romashkovo Part 2
In the morning they drove on. They were driving a lot or a little when suddenly a gentle smell came from the grove. The little train sighed and headed off into the grove.
"This is outrageous" - the passengers yelled again.
And the little train replied once more: "After all, we can arrive at the station later. But if we don't see a first lilies of the valley now, we'll late the entire summer!"
Only in the evening they moved on. They were driving a lot or a little when abruptly they came out on a hill. The little train looked into the distance and stopped.
"Why are we stopping now?" - the passengers were surprised.
"A sunset" - only answered the little train. - "If we don't see it, we will late the entire life. Because every sunset is the only one in the life."
And now no one was arguing . The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train horn.
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In the morning, they drove onresumed the journey.
In the morning, they resumed the journey.
They were driving [a lot or a little] (?) when suddenly a gentlefaint smell came from the grove.
They were driving [a lot or a little] (?) when suddenly a faint smell came from the grove.
And the little train replied once more: "After all ("What's the issue?"- would sound more appropriate here), we can arrive at the station later. And the little train replied once more: "After all ("What's the issue?"- would sound more appropriate here), we can arrive at the station later.
But if we don't see athe first lilies of the valley now, we'll be late the entire summer!
But if we don't see the first lilies of the valley now, we'll be late the entire summer!
Only in the evening did they moved onresume the journey .
Only in the evening did they resume the journey .
They were driving [a lot or a little](?) when abruptsuddenly, they came out onacross a hill.
They were driving [a lot or a little](?) when suddenly, they came across a hill.
"A sunset" -The little train only answuttered the little train.wo words: "A sunset."
The little train only uttered two words: "A sunset."
- "If we don't see it, we will be late theour entire life.
- "If we don't see it, we will be late our entire life.
Because every sunset is the only one in the lifunique.
Because every sunset is unique.
The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train to horn (verb). The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train to horn (verb).
Nov. 18, 2022
обратите внимание на использование слов. (horn vs TO horn), (gentle vs faint smell) Но в целом я понял смысл того, что вы пытались сказать, так что хорошая попытка! )
Nov. 23, 2022
Thank you
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The little train from Romashkovo Part 2 |
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In the morning they drove on.
In the morning, they |
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They were driving a lot or a little when suddenly a gentle smell came from the grove.
They were driving [a lot or a little] (?) when suddenly |
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The little train sighed and headed off into the grove. |
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"This is outrageous" - the passengers yelled again. |
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And the little train replied once more: "After all, we can arrive at the station later. And the little train replied once more: "After all ("What's the issue?"- would sound more appropriate here), we can arrive at the station later. And the little train replied once more: "After all ("What's the issue?"- would sound more appropriate here), we can arrive at the station later. |
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But if we don't see a first lilies of the valley now, we'll late the entire summer!
But if we don't see |
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Only in the evening they moved on.
Only in the evening did they |
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They were driving a lot or a little when abruptly they came out on a hill.
They were driving [a lot or a little](?) when |
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The little train looked into the distance and stopped. |
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"Why are we stopping now?" |
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- the passengers were surprised. |
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"A sunset" - only answered the little train.
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- "If we don't see it, we will late the entire life.
- "If we don't see it, we will be late |
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Because every sunset is the only one in the life.
Because every sunset is |
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And now no one was arguing . |
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The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train horn. The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train to horn (verb). The passengers watched the sunset for a long time and quietly waited for the train to horn (verb). |
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