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Nov. 15, 2022

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The little train from Romashkovo

Today I'll tell you a favorite fairy tail of my daughter.
Part 1
All the trains were like trains, and ony one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange. He was late everywhere.
One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!"
And the strange little train was believed for the last time.
"Choo-choo" - he was driving on the road. And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!" The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.
And the passangers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It is an outrage, we are going to be late!"
"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train. "But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!"
Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded: "It seems, he is right!" And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.

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Today I'll tell you a favorite fairy taile of my daughter.

tail= хвост

All the trains were likelooked just like ordinary/regular trains, and only one from Romashkovo was/looked/seemed a little bit strange./out of place

HeIt was late everywher time.

One day the boss of the staition strictly said to himtion told him in a strict tone: "If you are late one more time, then..." [And the little train got all and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world! (?)!]

And the strange little train was believed to be seen (?) for the last time.

"Choo-choo!" - he was driving it hummed as it travelled along the roadails.

And all of a sudden, a voice emerged from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"

And the passangers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It This anis outrageous, we are going to be late!

"We can arrive ato the station later" - said the little train.

"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the wholthe entire spring!

Somebody tried to object, but the smartest noddedpassenger nodded in agreement: "It seems, that he is right!"

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applebubble

Nov. 16, 2022

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Это русская сказка? сейчас я хочу читать эту историю 😄

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ksushalev

Nov. 17, 2022

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Это русская сказка? сейчас я хочу читать эту историю 😄

Да) завтра переведу вторую часть)

The little train from Romashkovo

Today I'll tell you amy daughter’s favorite fairy tail of my daughterle.

Part 1

All the trains were like trainsordinary, and only one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange.

He was late everywhere.

One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all (__) and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!

There should be another word between “all” and “and” to describe what the train is feeling, such as “surprised” or “annoyed”.

Also, I don’t quite understand the last sentence, it may be necessary to rewrite it. For example, “I promise I won’t be late!” or “I swear by my word it won’t happen again!”

"

And the strange little train was believed for thforgiven one last time.

"Choo-choo" - he was driving on the road.

And all of a sudden a voice came from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"

The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.

And the passaengers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It This anis outrageous, we are going to be late!

"

"We can arrive ato the station later," - said the little train.

"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!

"

Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded:. "It seems, he is right!"

And all night the whole train was listeninged to the nightingale singing.

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It’s a nice story!

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ksushalev

Nov. 18, 2022

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Thank you, my daughter likes it as well)

The little train from Romashkovo

Today I'll tell you aone of my daughter's favorite fairy tail of my daughterles.

All the trains were like trains, and onyThere once was a number of trains that were all alike, but the one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange.

HeIt was late everywheralways late.

One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him:told the train sternly, "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all andsimply hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!"

I'm not sure what you mean by "got all"

And he believed the strange little train was believed for the last time.

"Choo-choo" - hethat train was drimoving on the roadits tracks.

And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"

The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.

AndBut the passaengers looked out from the windows and started to shout:, "ItThis is an outrage, we are going to be late!"

"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train.

"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, wespring will bcome late for the whole spring!

Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded:person nodded in agreement saying, "It seems, he is right!"

And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.

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ksushalev

Nov. 18, 2022

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Thank you

The little train from Romashkovo


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Part 1


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All the trains were like trains, and ony one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange.


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All the trains were like trainsordinary, and only one from Romashkovo was a little bit strange.

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He was late everywhere.


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One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!


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I'm not sure what you mean by "got all"

One day the boss of the staition strictly said to him: "If you are late one more time, then..." And the little train got all (__) and hummed: " The last, honest, noble world!

There should be another word between “all” and “and” to describe what the train is feeling, such as “surprised” or “annoyed”. Also, I don’t quite understand the last sentence, it may be necessary to rewrite it. For example, “I promise I won’t be late!” or “I swear by my word it won’t happen again!”

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And the strange little train was believed for the last time.


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"Choo-choo" - he was driving on the road.


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"Choo-choo" - he was driving on the road.

"Choo-choo!" - he was driving it hummed as it travelled along the roadails.

And all of a sudden a voice from the forest: "Tweet-tweet..!"


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The little train sighed and headed off into the forest.


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And the passangers looked out from the windows and started to shout: "It is an outrage, we are going to be late!


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"We can arrive to the station later" - said the little train.


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"We can arrive ato the station later," - said the little train.

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"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the whole spring!


"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, wespring will bcome late for the whole spring!

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"But if we don't hear the first song of the nightingale now, we will be late for the wholthe entire spring!

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Somebody tried to object, but the smartest nodded: "It seems, he is right!"


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And all night the whole train was listening to the nightingale singing.


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And all night the whole train was listeninged to the nightingale singing.

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