Dec. 28, 2019
The last working day for this year
Yesterday was the last working day for this year. We clean our office this day of every year. Our team consist of 4 people but 2 coworkers have already took paid-holidays so only two of my boss and I were in.
I told the boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, then he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk. He is fat and gets easily sweat for just a little movement so he looks as if he is doing a great job. I had no choice but to clean the cabinets alone.
We went to a restaurant whose pizza is very good for lunch. At a cashier, I found my purse was empty. But I thought at that time maybe he would buy my lunch. He said that he just paid in advance for me and give back to him without delay.
I thought his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet what a small mind he has! Probably his mind is a half as wide as mine😂😂
今年の仕事納め
昨日は今年の仕事納めでした。毎年、この日は会社で大掃除をします。私のチームワークは4名ですが、二人が有休でいなかったため上司と私の二人だけでした。
資料があるキャビネットを一緒に掃除しようと上司に言うと、自分のデスク掃除だけでいっぱいだ、と言いました。上司は太っています。ちょっと動くと汗をかき、いかにも仕事をしてるように見えます。仕方がないので私は一人で掃除しました。
ランチに上司とピザがおいしいレストランへ行きました。会計の時、財布が空っぽなのに気付きました。私はその時、午前中頑張ったから上司がおごってくれるかもとふと思いました。上司は言いました｢貸すだけだから。すぐ返してよ｣。
私より２倍の給料をもらっており、体もこんなに大きいのに、心はなんて小さいのだろう、多分、私の半分ぐらいの小ささだろうと思いました(笑)
Our team consist of 4 people but 2 coworkteam members haved already tookaken paid-holidays, so only two of my boss and I were in.
The other corrections suggesting "2 of our coworkers" are also ok.
But "took" should be "taken."
He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and give back to him without dand asked/told me to pay him back immediatelay.
I thought, his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet what a small mind he has!
Dec. 29, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
Our team consist of 4 people but 2 of our coworkers haved already took paid-holidays —so only two of my boss and I were in.
Another corrector wrote "2 of my coworkers", which is also correct. However, the other corrector did not correct verb tense from "have" to "had". In addition, a complex sentence (with many phrases) generally only has one conjunction, unless a dash ( — ) or a semicolon (;) separates the sentence in some way.
Dec. 29, 2019
Thank you for the correction and the kind explanation!
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Yesterday was the last working day ofor thise year.
We clean our office on this day of every year.
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I told the boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, thenhowever he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk.
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I had no choice but to clean the cabinets alone.
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But, at that time, I thought at that time maybe he would buypay for my lunch.
He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and to give it back to him without dimmediatelay.
I thought his salary is around twice as much as mine and his body is around twice as big as mine, yet whatbut he has such a small mind he has!
Probably hHis mind is aprobably half as wide as miney mind 😂😂
Dec. 29, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
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Dec. 29, 2019
Thank you for the correction!
The lLast wWorking dDay for tThis yYear
Yesterday was the last working day for this year.
We clean our office on this day of every year.
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I told the* boss to clean our team's cabinets with me, thenbut he said that he had his hands full with cleaning his desk.
*I told 'my' boss... Would sound more natural.
using but is more appropriate in this situation because you asked your boss to do something BUT he could not take on the task: "but" is used when you are about to state something of contrast to your previous statement. I don't know if I explained that very well, so if you need any further explanation please feel free to ask!
He is fat and gets easily sweaty forom just a little movement, so he looksed as if he iwas doing a great job.
Because you are speaking of yesterday you should use the past tense:
look = looked(past tense)
is = was(past tense)
I had no choice but to clean the cabinets alone.
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For lunch, we went to a restaurant that sells very good* pizza.
*you could also say, "delicious", "tasty", or "scrumptious", all kinds of different expressive words. :)
At athe cashier, I found my purse was empty.¶
or¶
At the cashier, I realized my purse was empty.
The second is probably more commonly said though both are natural.
But I thought, at thate time, I thought maybe he would buypay for my lunch.
He said that he just paid for me in advance for me and to give it back to him without dimmediatelay.
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This is funny, lol. xD
Dec. 28, 2019
I thought his salary iwas around twice as much as mine and h. His body is aroundmay be almost twice as big as mine, yet* what a small mind he has!
Sorry, I mean: * or "but"
Dec. 29, 2019
Thank you for the correction and the kind explanation! My boss is very funny like comedian😆
Dec. 29, 2019
That's cool! I bet it makes work more fun. x)
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