Dec. 11, 2022
The last time I was truly happy
Happiness is something that you are able to experience everyday. Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, in case you know what makes you happy.
Yesterday I decided to get some candles as New Year’s gifts for my family and I had to go to another part of the city. It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go for 20 minutes on food. I was sure it was a terrible idea! But when I walked out of the metro station it was snowing like in a fairytale! It felt like I was in Narnia or something. The snowflakes were slowly floating in the air and at that moment I felt really truly happy. So I walked along the street and admired the beauty of the winter. I was thinking about why I go out so rarely this time and that I need to make more time for walking outside. The weather was incredible! It was a simple but especially memorable walk. I believe that it is the simple things that make us happy. Maybe we often forget about it, but what if you just stop and think about what you can do right now that will make you happier?
Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, in casef you know what makes you happy.
It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go travel for 20 minutes onfor food.
But when I walked out of the metro station it was snowing like in a fairytale!/as if I was in a fairytale!
The snowflakes were slowly floating in the air and at that moment I felt really truly felt happy.
The last time I was truly happy
Happiness is something that you are able to experience everyday.
Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, in cas long ase you know what makes you happy.
Yesterday I decided to get some candles as New Year’s gifts for my family and I had to go to another part of the city.
It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go for 20 minutes on foodt.
I was sure it was a terrible idea!
But when I walked out of the metro station it was snowing like in a fairytale!
It felt like I was in Narnia or something.
The snowflakes were slowly floating in the air and at that moment I felt really truly happy.
So I walked along the street and admired the beauty of the winter.
I was thinking about why I go out so rarely this time and that I need to make more time for walking outside.
Here is a more natural sentence:
"It made me wonder why I go out so rarely during this time, and made me feel that I need to make more time for walking outside."
The weather was incredible!
It was a simple but especially memorable walk.
I believe that it is the simple things that make us happy.
Maybe we often forget about it, but what if you just stop and think about what you can do right now that will make you happier?
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Good writing! I will keep this advice in mind!
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Happiness is something that you are able to experience everyday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, in case you know what makes you happy. Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, Sometimes it happens unexpectedly, but in fact you can create situations that make you happy, i |
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Yesterday I decided to get some candles as New Year’s gifts for my family and I had to go to another part of the city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go for 20 minutes on food. It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go for 20 minutes on foo It was a long way on the metro, then I had to go travel for 20 minutes |
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I was sure it was a terrible idea! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But when I walked out of the metro station it was snowing like in a fairytale! This sentence has been marked as perfect! But when I walked out of the metro station it was snowing like in a fairytale!/as if I was in a fairytale! |
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It felt like I was in Narnia or something. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The snowflakes were slowly floating in the air and at that moment I felt really truly happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The snowflakes were slowly floating in the air and at that moment I |
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So I walked along the street and admired the beauty of the winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was thinking about why I go out so rarely this time and that I need to make more time for walking outside. I was thinking Here is a more natural sentence: "It made me wonder why I go out so rarely during this time, and made me feel that I need to make more time for walking outside." |
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The weather was incredible! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was a simple but especially memorable walk. It was a simple but |
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I believe that it is the simple things that make us happy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Maybe we often forget about it, but what if you just stop and think about what you can do right now that will make you happier? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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