Oct. 22, 2021
The last Kingdom
Last tv serie I have watched, is "The last Kingdom". The plot is about the invasion of England for vikings from denmark and the story follow a character named 'Uhtred', the young son of a xaxon king. In the begin, in the first battle between a not very large viking army, but very brave and expert against the king of the north, the kid is caught by the vikings, growing up and educated with them. Uhtred become in a young and skill viking warrior, but always is trying to find his place between the xaxons and the vikings, without fit with none of them. At last, although he fight to service of king alfred, he is always thinking to recover the kingdom of his father.
It's a fantastic serie and I really liked it.
The lLast Kingdom
LThe last tvTV series I have watched, i was "The lLast Kingdom".
"I have watched" is technically correct but it's better to say "I watched" as it sounds more natural.
The plot is about the invasion of England for vby Vikings from dDenmark and the story follows a character named 'Uhtred', the young son of a xSaxon king.
I think you mean "Saxon" here instead of "Xaxon" but ignore me if I'm mistaken. "Denmark" should be capitalised.
In the begin, in the firstning, there is a battle between a not very large vViking army, but. As a very brave and an expert against the king of the north, the kid is caught by the vVikings, growing up and educated with them.
"Vikings" should have a capital because it is a proper noun.
Uhtred becoame in a young and skill ved Viking warrior, but is always is trying to find his place between the xSaxons and the vVikings, without fitting with noneany of them.
At last, although he fiought to service of ke King aAlfred, he is always thinking to recover the kingdom of his father.
It's a fantastic series and I really liked it.
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Good job writing! The biggest error you commonly make is not capitalizing some words. Put capitals in front of proper nouns (eg. countries and peoples' names). Otherwise, it's really good.
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It's a fantastic serie and I really liked it. It's a fantastic series and I really liked it. |
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Last tv serie I have watched, is "The last Kingdom".
"I have watched" is technically correct but it's better to say "I watched" as it sounds more natural. |
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The plot is about the invasion of England for vikings from denmark and the story follow a character named 'Uhtred', the young son of a xaxon king. The plot is about the invasion of England I think you mean "Saxon" here instead of "Xaxon" but ignore me if I'm mistaken. "Denmark" should be capitalised. |
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In the begin, in the first battle between a not very large viking army, but very brave and expert against the king of the north, the kid is caught by the vikings, growing up and educated with them. In the begin "Vikings" should have a capital because it is a proper noun. |
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Uhtred become in a young and skill viking warrior, but always is trying to find his place between the xaxons and the vikings, without fit with none of them. Uhtred bec |
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At last, although he fight to service of king alfred, he is always thinking to recover the kingdom of his father. At last, although he f |
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