March 5, 2025
I played a game called Tails of Iron 2: Whiskers of Winter last month, it is a really good indie game.
The history is about a rat called Arlo who had his father killed by bats. You play with Arlo defeating some monsters, exploring new places and crafting new weapons.
The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo father.
The game is very difficult if you don't have the correct equipment in some situations.
My rating: 7.5/10
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I played a game called Tails of Iron 2: Whiskers of Winter last month, it is a really good indie game.
The history is about a rat called Arlo who had hise father was killed by bats.
You play withas Arlo defeating some monsters, exploring new places and crafting new weapons.
The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo's father.
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The “latest” game sounds like the most recent game you have played (and you may play more games in the future), while the “last” game sounds like it is the final game.
I played a game called Tails of Iron 2: Whiskers of Winter last month, i. It is a really good indie game.
The history is about a rat callnamed Arlo who had hise father was killed by bats.
You play withas Arlo defeating some monsters, exploring new places and crafting new weapons.
Arlo is the character you control, so it makes more sense to use “as” instead of “with.”
The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo’s father.
I added a possessive apostrophe.
TIn some situations, the game is very difficult if you don't have the correct equipment in some situations.
My rating: 7.5/10
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Thank you for introducing me to this game! It sounds like an exciting storyline. I just made some minor grammar suggestions for making it read a little more naturally. I will recommended this game to my husband.
The Last Game I have Played Recently
Last month, I played a game called Tails of Iron 2: Whiskers of Winter last month, i. It is a really good indie game.
The history is about a rat called Arlo who had his fatherse father had been killed by bats.
"Who had his father killed by bats" means that Arlo had asked the bats to kill his father. I don't think that is what you meant, so I changed the sentence.
You play with Arlo, defeating some monsters, exploring new places and crafting new weapons.
The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo's father.
The game is very difficult in some situations if you don't have the correct equipment in some situations.
My rating: 7.5/10
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Well done. I mostly just changed the order of words in your sentence to make them flow more smoothly.
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The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo father. The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo's father. The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo’s father. I added a possessive apostrophe. The final boss is the rat who killed Arlo's father. |
The game is very difficult if you don't have the correct equipment in some situations. The game is very difficult in some situations if you don't have the correct equipment
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