June 6, 2022
The King of Paris
A Spanish athlete has won in Paris again. Last weekend, Real Madrid, won its fourteenth Champion League in this city: A feat that no other football team has ever achieved before. This weekend, it was the incombustible Spanish tennis player Nadal who won his fourteenth Roland Garros, something that no other player has ever done. In doing so, he also won his twenty-second Grand Slam. Achieving this landmark makes the distance between Nadal and his two immediate pursuers, Djokovic and Fedeer, become even larger.
It’s likely that this Roland Garros be the most memorable for Nadal, even more so that the first one he won at the early age of nineteen. After a year in which Nadal “only” won seven titles because of his many injuries, this season was expected to be his last chance to win a Gran Slam. Not only is Nadal already thirty six years old but his career has also been injury-riddled. Against all odds, Nadal won the first Gran Slam of the season, the Australian Open: The tournament was very controversial because the Australian government banned Djokovic from entering the country. After two and a half months without competing, Nadal arrived to Paris thinking that this could be his last tournament, thereby his last chance to add another Gran Slam to his extensive record. After passing four rounds, Nadal beat Djokovic in four sets in the quarterfinals. In the semifinal, Nadal faced the German player Zverev in one of the most exhausting matches ever seen. After three hours playing under severe conditions, the match promised to be epic. Nadal was in the lead, but his age and injures could turn the score around at any time. At that moment, something completely unexpected happened. Trying to reach a ball, Zverec suffered a sprained heel. Not being Zverec able to continue playing any longer made Nadal reach once more the craved final.
Although Nadal had to play with one of his feet anesthetised, something that he had done many times before because of him suffering an intense pain, he was the favourite to win the final. Oddly enough, Nadal’s opponent, Casper Ruud, trains at the tennis academy Nadal has in his home town. I have watched Nadal winnig almost all his Roland Garros, but this time, his face showed an emotion that I have never seen before. This may have been his last tournament, though as far as Nadal is concerned, only God knows.
A Spanish athlete has won in Paris again.
Last weekend, Real Madrid, won its fourteenth Champion League in this city: A - a feat that no other football team has ever achieved before.
In doing so, he also won his twenty-second Grand Slam.
Achieving this landmark makes the distance between Nadal and his two immediate pursuers, Djokovic and Fedeer, becomegrow even larger.
It’s likely that this Roland Garros will be the most memorable achievement for Nadal, even more so thatn the first one he won at the early age of nineteen.
After a year in which Nadal “only” won seven titles because ofdue to his many injuries, this season was expected to be his last chance to win a Gran Slam.
Not only is Nadal already thirty six years old, but his career has also been injury-riddled.
It might sound more natural to say: "riddled with setbacks due to countless injuries".
Against all odds, Nadal won the first Gran Slam of the season, the Australian Open: The - a tournament which was very controversial because the Australian government banned Djokovic from entering the country.
You can also say: "...because of the Australian government's decision to ban Djokovic from entering the country".
After two and a half months without competing, Nadal arrived to Paris thinking that this could be his last tournament, thereby his last chance to add another Gran Slam to his extensive record.
After three hours of playing under severe conditions, the match was promised to be epic.
Nadal was in the lead, but his age and injures could turn the score around at any time.
At that moment, something completely unexpected happened.
TryAttempting to reach a ball, Zverec suffered a sprained heel.
NWith Zverec not being Zverec able to continue playing any longer made, Nadal reached once more the for the much-craved finals.
Although Nadal had to play with one of his feet anesthetised, something that he had done many times before because of himdue to suffering an intense pain, he was the favourite to win the finals.
Oddly enough, Nadal’s opponent, Casper Ruud, trains at the tennis academy in Nadal has in hi's home town.
I have watched Nadal winnig almost all his Roland Garros, but this time, his face showed an emotion that I have never seen before.
This may have been his last tournament, though as far as Nadal is concerned, only God knows.
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Fantastic writing! Your English is quite advanced, so keep up the good work. I am not familiar with men's tennis, but after having read your article, it seems like Nadal has achieved an incredible feat. Congratulations to him & all of his loyal fans!
June 15, 2022
Hello, how's it going? I have written posts about Nadal on another website similar to this called Lang-8. Not only is Nadal an inspiration inside the tennis court but he is also a role model outside it. He isn't the kind of sports superstart you can see these days. In spite of his successful sporting career, Nadal continues being the same humble "child" who he used to be when he began his career.
Thanks my friend for taking the time to read and correct my post. I really appreciate it.
The King of Paris
A Spanish athlete has won in Paris again.
Last weekend, Real Madrid, won its fourteenth Champion League in this city: A feat that no other football team has ever achieved before.
This weekend, it was the incombustible Spanish tennis player Nadal who won his fourteenth Roland Garros, something that no other player has ever done.
In doing so, he also won his twenty-second Grand Slam.
Achieving this landmark makes the distance between Nadal and his two immediate pursuers, Djokovic and Fedeer, become even larger.
It’s likely that this Roland Garros will be the most memorable for Nadal, even more so thatn the first one he won at the early age of nineteen.
After a year in which Nadal “only” won seven titles because of his many injuries, this season was expected to be his last chance to win a Gran Slam.
Not only is Nadal already thirty six years old, but his career has also been injury-riddled.
Against all odds, Nadal won the first Grand Slam of the season, the Australian Open: The tournament was very controversial because the Australian government banned Djokovic from entering the country.
After two and a half months without competing, Nadal arrived to Paris thinking that this could be his last tournament, thereby his last chance to add another Grand Slam to his extensive record.
After passing four rounds, Nadal beat Djokovic in four sets in the quarterfinals.
In the semifinal, Nadal faced the German player Zverev in one of the most exhausting matches ever seen.
After three hours playing under severe conditions, the match promised to be epic.
Nadal was in the lead, but his age and injures could turn the score around at any time.
At that moment, something completely unexpected happened.
Trying to reach a ball, Zverec suffered a sprained heel.
Not being ZverecZverec not beig able to continue playing any longer made Nadal reach once more the craved final.
Although Nadal had to play with one of his feet anesthetised, something that he had done many times before because of him suffering ain intense pain, he was the favourite to win the final.
Oddly enough, Nadal’s opponent, Casper Ruud, trains at the tennis academy Nadal has in his home town.
I have watched Nadal winnig almost all of his Roland Garros, but this time, his face showed an emotion that I have never seen before.
This may have been his last tournament, though as far as Nadal is concerned, only God knows.
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Great job!
June 7, 2022
Many thanks Louis for taking the time to read and correct my long post. I really appreciate it.
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