Jan. 11, 2021
The invention of paper
Paper has been widely applied in every corner of our lives. You need paper to write, exchange, contain things, and solve sanitation problem. Due to the inexpensiveness of paper and its effectiveness as a writing medium, massive production of a significantly larger number of books can be achieved, producing knowledge cheaper, faster, farther, and easier. Paper’s traits also prompted the prosperity of economy.
1. Paper’s invention simplifies and lower the cost of making a book so that decrease rates of illiteracy, rising the level of education. Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the storage medium of writing.
2. Extremely light weight decides paper’s storage and transportation are better than any other materials.
3. Paper money’s strength brought about radical changes in economy which replaced the foundation of financial structure. Businessmen trades with lighter, portable, and more reliable paper money, able to making more deals.
Paper has been widely appliused in every corner of our lives.
"used" just sounds more natural than "applied" here
You need paper to write, exchange ideas, contain things, and solve sanitation problemclean messes.
Instead of "solve a sanitation problem" usually you would say "clean a mess". Sometimes people also say "clean up a mess", but they're both the same.
Due to the inexpensiveness of paper and its effectiveness as a writing medium, massive production of a significantly larger number of books can be achieved, producing knowledge cheaper, faster, farther, and easier.
Paper’s traits also prompted the prosperity of economyhelped economies prosper.
The original sentence sounded kind of awkward
1. Paper’sThe invention of paper simplifiesd and lowered the cost of making a book so thats, which decrease rates ofd illiteracy, rising the level ofates and raised education levels.
"paper's invention" sounds like you mean "something that paper itself invented". That's why I corrected it to "the invention of paper", which is what I think you meant.
also "To rise" does not take a direct object, as it is an intransitive verb. "to raise" does take a direct object as it is a transitive verb.
Examples:
1) The sun rises.
2) The smoke rose to the second floor of the house.
3) I raise the flag every morning at school.
4) My boss raised my salary last year.
Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the storage medium ofprimary writing medium.
2. EIt's extremely light weight decides paper’s, which makes it easier to storage and transportation are better paper more than any other materials.
3. Paper money’s strengthThe strength of paper money brought about radical changes in economyies, which replacchanged the foundation of financial structures.
Businessmen trades with lighter, portable, and more reliable paper money, and are able to makinge more deals.
"Businessmen" is plural so you need to use the plural form of "trade"
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You did a good job. I agree that the invention of paper has had many effects on our world. I don't know where we would be without it!
Jan. 14, 2021
thank you for your correction, Sabertooth!
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Paper has been widely applied in every corner of our lives. Paper has been widely "used" just sounds more natural than "applied" here |
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You need paper to write, exchange, contain things, and solve sanitation problem. You need paper to write, exchange ideas, contain things, and Instead of "solve a sanitation problem" usually you would say "clean a mess". Sometimes people also say "clean up a mess", but they're both the same. |
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Due to the inexpensiveness of paper and its effectiveness as a writing medium, massive production of a significantly larger number of books can be achieved, producing knowledge cheaper, faster, farther, and easier. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Paper’s traits also prompted the prosperity of economy. Paper’s traits also The original sentence sounded kind of awkward |
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1. Paper’s invention simplifies and lower the cost of making a book so that decrease rates of illiteracy, rising the level of education. 1. "paper's invention" sounds like you mean "something that paper itself invented". That's why I corrected it to "the invention of paper", which is what I think you meant. also "To rise" does not take a direct object, as it is an intransitive verb. "to raise" does take a direct object as it is a transitive verb. Examples: 1) The sun rises. 2) The smoke rose to the second floor of the house. 3) I raise the flag every morning at school. 4) My boss raised my salary last year. |
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Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the storage medium of writing. Paper is an important invention because it replaced expensive parchment and papyrus as the |
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2. Extremely light weight decides paper’s storage and transportation are better than any other materials. 2. |
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3. Paper money’s strength brought about radical changes in economy which replaced the foundation of financial structure. 3. |
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Businessmen trades with lighter, portable, and more reliable paper money, able to making more deals. Businessmen trade "Businessmen" is plural so you need to use the plural form of "trade" |
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