The topic we arefor discussiong is whether the internet is making us less social or not.

“Or not” is not necessary.
Alternatively, and more formal in the debating context, is “The issue is whether the internet is making us less social.”

Nowadays,In today’s world, the internet is part of our everydaily life.

I can't imagine going a whole week without using social media, or simply without doing a little research whenresearching something I don'’t know somethonlinge.

Is this good or bad?

Alternatively, “Is this a good thing?”

Talking about sociality, there are a lot of pros to considerhe internet brings many social benefits.

“Sociality” is an academic term not common in everyday usage.

In the first place, onFirst, on the internet you can find a lot ofmeet many people with whom your samhare interests . You cand become friends with them, allowing you to increaseing your social circle.

Secondly, you can communicate with your friends even if you'rewhen far from home.

Alternatively, “You can also communicate with friends from anywhere in the world.”

For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks tocan still chat with or call friends at home using social media.

However, as we know,the internet has also some negative sidpresents challenges.

Firstly, a lot of, many teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going outsocializing with friends and preferringin person and instead staying home to playing online.

In addition, many young boys and girls, when they see eachother,children prefer playing a game online when they hang out instead of rephysical games.

“Hang out” is the more common way to say “when they see each other”

In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every sidemy opinion, everyone should have access to the internet, but itaccess should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger onefor children by their parents.

Nowadays, the internet is part of our everyday life.

In English, whenever talking about the internet in this context, it always has to have the article “the” in front of it

In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.

However, as we know, the internet has also has some negative sides.

Firstly, a lot of teenagers are becoming obsessed with things like video games, avoiding going out with friends and preferring to staying home playing online.

In conclusion, from my perspective, considering every side, everyone should have access to internet, but it should be limited and controlled by parents for the younger ones children.

In the first place, on the internet you can find a lot of people with your same interests and become friends with them, allowing you to increase your social circle.

Sadly, in English you say "on the internet/Internet", not like in Italian, su internet, without article.

For example, if you're on vacation, you don't have to stop chatting or calling each others thanks to social media.

However, as we know, internet has also has some negative sides.