April 3, 2022
The influence of others
Today it's not difficult to find people who believe they're unique and special. The teenlike attitude according to which the others have no influence in the way a person constructs his identity is scattered over the so-called young adults. For some people their family as well as the relations they had with others before they discovered their real self are simple opposite forces which did no good to their current character. Their uniqueness resides in that they were able to be themselves against the others, as if being themselves was something they knew before being born in a family and a society.
But, nobody escapes from the influence of others. All of us have had the experience of finding oneself acting as somebody else without having decided to do so. We imitate and is natural that something of the people we deal with in a daily basis rubs off on us. If the way a new friend talk about the school have rubbed on you with ease, what influence do you expect your family, old friends and relatives had on your decisions and on your newly found real self?
Language-wise, what vibe does this text give off?
The influence of others
Alt: Being Influenced by Others
Today, it's not difficult to find people who believe they're unique and special.
Alt: Nowadays, it's easy to find people who
The teenlike attitude according to which the othersse people believe the outside world haves no influence in the way a personthey constructs his their identity is scattered over the so-called young adults.
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For some people their family as well as the relations they had with others before they discovered their real self are simple opposite forces which did no good to their current characterTheir family and friends are simply forces to rebel against.
Their uniqueness resides in that they were able to be themselves against the others, as if being themselves was something they knew before being born in a family and a society.
I'm honestly not sure what you're trying to say with this.
ButHowever, nobody can escapes from the influence of others.
In this case, "however" works better as a transition word.
All of us have had the experience of finding oneself acting aslike somebody else without havmaking decidedthe conscious decision to do so.
We imitate and is natural that something of the people we dealIt is natural to imitate those who we interact with ion a daily basis rubs off on us.
If the way a new friend talk about the school have rubbeds can rub off on you with ease, what influence do you expect your family, old friends and relativesthe people around you hadve on your decisions and on your newly found realsense of self?
Language-wise, what vibe does this text give off?
April 3, 2022
Thank you!
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The influence of others The influence of others Alt: Being Influenced by Others |
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Today it's not difficult to find people who believe they're unique and special. Today, it's not difficult to find people who believe they're unique and special. Alt: Nowadays, it's easy to find people who |
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The teenlike attitude according to which the others have no influence in the way a person constructs his identity is scattered over the so-called young adults. The Edited to avoid wordiness. |
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For some people their family as well as the relations they had with others before they discovered their real self are simple opposite forces which did no good to their current character.
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Their uniqueness resides in that they were able to be themselves against the others, as if being themselves was something they knew before being born in a family and a society. Their uniqueness resides in that they were able to be themselves against the others, as if being themselves was something they knew before being born in a family and a society. I'm honestly not sure what you're trying to say with this. |
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But, nobody escapes from the influence of others.
In this case, "however" works better as a transition word. |
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All of us have had the experience of finding oneself acting as somebody else without having decided to do so. All of us have had the experience of |
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We imitate and is natural that something of the people we deal with in a daily basis rubs off on us.
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If the way a new friend talk about the school have rubbed on you with ease, what influence do you expect your family, old friends and relatives had on your decisions and on your newly found real self? If the way a new friend talk |
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Language-wise, what vibe does this text give off? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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