Jan. 14, 2021
The important stuff for my family
I think it is some photos of my grand grand parents which were kept in my grandfather’s house. I have seen these pictures since I was a child. At that time, my grandfather told me some stories about them. I really don’t know how my family got those pictures, but they have been being kept there for so many years. The reason they are so valuable for my family is that our family was separated by the war between the Communist Party of China and Guomingtang a century ago. After Guomingtang lost this war, they were exile to Taiwan. So even we were so close to each other, we were not allowed to see each other because of the tension between two parties. In this case, the only thing we can do was kept the photos of each other to keep each other in our memory. On top of that, It also reminds us of our family history like how our family was formed. Most of all, It is a way to strengthen our family bond, even though we have not been keeping in touch for so many years, we always have each other in our mind and we know the existence of each other.
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At that time, my grandfather told me some stories about them.
"At that time" is acceptable. "Back then" also works well here.
I really don’t know how my family got those pictures, but they ha've been being kept there for so many years.
The reason they are so valuable for my family is that our family was separated by the war between the Communist Party of China and Guomingtang a century ago.
Acceptable. Another way to say it: "They are so valuable to my family because..."
After Guomingtang lost this war, they were exiled to Taiwan.
Past tense
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- "importantly" gives the reader a stronger sense of meaning behind what they're about to read. "Most of all" is acceptable too.
- I don't think I understand the phrase "we know the existence of each other." Do you mean you know everyone who is alive in your family?
Jan. 15, 2021
Thank you for your help~ I mean we know we are always there for each other
Jan. 15, 2021
No problem. Okay, that phrase makes more sense.
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The important stuff for my family The Generally, most words in a title are capitalized except for articles (a, an), prepositions (for, in), and short conjunctions (3 letters or less). This is called Title Case. |
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I think it is some photos of my grand grand parents which were kept in my grandfather’s house. I think |
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I have seen these pictures since I was a child. I haven't seen these pictures since I was a child. Alternative: have not seen |
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At that time, my grandfather told me some stories about them. At that time, my grandfather told me some stories about them. "At that time" is acceptable. "Back then" also works well here. |
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I really don’t know how my family got those pictures, but they have been being kept there for so many years. I really don’t know how my family got those pictures, but they |
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The reason they are so valuable for my family is that our family was separated by the war between the Communist Party of China and Guomingtang a century ago. The reason they are so valuable for my family is that our family was separated by the war between the Communist Party of China and Guomingtang a century ago. Acceptable. Another way to say it: "They are so valuable to my family because..." |
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After Guomingtang lost this war, they were exile to Taiwan. After Guomingtang lost this war, they were exiled to Taiwan. Past tense |
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So even we were so close to each other, we were not allowed to see each other because of the tension between two parties.
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In this case, the only thing we can do was kept the photos of each other to keep each other in our memory. In this case, the only thing we c |
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On top of that, It also reminds us of our family history like how our family was formed.
"Additionally" or "In addition" are shorter openers. |
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Most of all, It is a way to strengthen our family bond, even though we have not been keeping in touch for so many years, we always have each other in our mind and we know the existence of each other. Most |
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