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Human beings get essential things for survival from the environment we are living in. The air we breath, the foods we eat, the water we drink, wash and every aspect of our action and the comforts we made are all from the environment. The furnitures, kitchen utensils, the glasses and even the house itself are all from the environment. So, to continue living a life that is healthy and even for luxuries life, we need to keep our environment from degrading.
The importance of protecting the environment
The air we breath, the foods we eat, the water we drink, and wash with, and every aspect of our actionthing we use and the comforts we made are allhave made all come from the environment.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "every aspect of our action", but the above correction was my best guess. Let me know if you were trying to say something else.
The phrase "are all made from the environment" is understandable but sounds a bit unnatural. It kind of sounds like the whole world is being used to make even just a little piece of food or a small amount of water.
The fFurnitures, kitchen utensils, the glasses and even the house itself are alls themselves all come from the environment.
Since you are talking pretty generally, it makes sense not to use "the" in front of objects, as doing that would mean referring to a specific object. If you wanted to be more specific you could say something like "the furniture we use, the kitchen utensils we eat with, the glasses we drink from, and even the houses we live in come from the environment/are made from things in the environment".
So, to continue living a life that is healthy, and evento allow for luxuries in life, we need to keep our environment from degrading.
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I agree that looking after the environment is important, especially when thinking about the longer-term future. Unfortunately, we don't seem to be doing a very good job. Nevertheless, I think the small things that we can do matter a lot, like recycling where possible and thinking about the transport we use in our day-to-day lives.
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Human beings get essential things for survival from the environment we are living in. |
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The air we breath, the foods we eat, the water we drink, wash and every aspect of our action and the comforts we made are all from the environment. The air we breath, the foods we eat, the water we drink I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "every aspect of our action", but the above correction was my best guess. Let me know if you were trying to say something else. The phrase "are all made from the environment" is understandable but sounds a bit unnatural. It kind of sounds like the whole world is being used to make even just a little piece of food or a small amount of water. |
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The furnitures, kitchen utensils, the glasses and even the house itself are all from the environment.
Since you are talking pretty generally, it makes sense not to use "the" in front of objects, as doing that would mean referring to a specific object. If you wanted to be more specific you could say something like "the furniture we use, the kitchen utensils we eat with, the glasses we drink from, and even the houses we live in come from the environment/are made from things in the environment". |
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So, to continue living a life that is healthy and even for luxuries life, we need to keep our environment from degrading. So, to continue living a life that is healthy, and |
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