Feb. 2, 2020
The Importance of Dress Codes
Today is pleasant as usual, yet not all my days are so agreeable.
I listened to a brief English podcast related to dress code. There were two people, named Robb and Jennifer, discussing the topic. As I understood, Robb prefers to wear casual clothing to work , such as jeans, casual trousers, t-shirts, etc. Afterwards , Jennifer asked him what clothes women wear . He replied a blouse and a skirt . Namely they tend to dress in a more formal way, but, of course, some wear casual clothes. Jennifer asked a question Robb from the Karl Lagerfeld's quote, which unfortunately I've already forgotten.The question was something like, "Which dress cannot be considered underdressed or over dressed?" In other words, which dress is really appropriate for all occasions ? She gave him three options: a) a pair of jeans, b) the little black dress, or c) a pair of high heels. He said he had no idea which one fits, but he chose the answer a) as a guess.
Afterwards, she stated that they would find out the answer at the end of the programme
There was a miniblog post on the social network Weibo, the Chinese equivalent ( or rip - off ) of Twitter (I have no idea), about a woman in Shanghai, who wore a see-through dress on the metro. This has promoted lots of debates . Mainly, two opinions appeared among the people. The first one is that such a dress is should not be worn because it's extremely provocative and causes a bunch of unwanted comments. Another one is that people can dress however they like or prefer, and people can't judge them. Unsurprisingly, she was arrested for that, and 70% of people opposed wearing a transparent dress. Also, I recall someone held up the banner stating: " I can wear, but you can't harass me." It's either this woman or other person. Some people are resentful of being blamed for wearing transparent clothes, so they assume it's unfair.
At the end of the programme, Robb guessed that it could be the answer a) ; nonetheless he was totally wrong. The right answer was b).
That's all I figured out from the podcast.
The Importance of Dress Code
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The Importance of Dress Codes
Today is pleasant day as usual, yet not all my days are so agreeable.
There were two people, (Robb and Jenniffer), discussing about the topic.
As I understood it, Robb prefers to wear a casual style to work, such as jeans, casual trousers, t-shirt ands, etc.
After that, Jenniffer asked him what clothes women wear, and then he replied blouse,s and skirts, namelythat is, they tend to dress in formal way, but, of course, some wear casual clothes.
Jenniffer asked Robb a question Robb from thefrom Karl Lagerfeld's quote, which unfortunately I've already forgotten.
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For some reason, LangCorrect posted the second half of your essay together which made it difficult to correct, but I agree with the first user's corrections. Great writing :)
Feb. 2, 2020
Thanks, but my punctuation is bad and sentences tend to run on.
Importance of Dress Code
Today is a pleasant day as usual, yebut not all my days are aso agreeable.
I listened to a brief, English podcast related to dress code.
There were two people, named (Robb and Jeniffer), discussing about the topic.
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Jeniffer asked a question Robb from the Karlabout the Lagerfeld's quote, which unfortunately I've already forgotten.
The question was something sort oflike: "Which dress cannot be underdressed and over-dressed?" The meaning refers to which dress really fits to all occasions.
She gave him three options: a) a pair of jeans, b) the little black dress, or c) a pair of high heels, then h. He said he had no idea which one fits, but he chose the answer a), ats a guess.
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At the end of the programme, Robb guessed that it could be the answer a),; nonetheless he was totally wrong. The right answer was b).
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That's all I figured out from the podcast.
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There are some punctuation errors and run-on sentences, but you did a good job summarizing the podcast! :)
Feb. 2, 2020
Thanks.
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She gave him three options: a) a pair of jeans, b) the little black dress or c) a pair of high heels, then he said he had no idea which one fits, but he chose the answer a), at a guess. after, she stated that they would find out the answer at the end of the progamme. Straight to the point, there was a miniblog post on the social network Weibo, which is chinese equivalent or ripoff of Twitter (I have no idea), about the woman in Shanghai, who wore a see-through dress in the metro. This has promoted lots of debates, consequently, two opinions appeared among the people. The first one is that such a dress is not allowed to be worn overall, because it's extremely provocative and cause a bunch of unwanted comments. Another one is that people dress whatever they like or prefer, so people can't judge them. Unsurprisingly, she was arrested for that, and 70 per cent of people opposed wearing transparent dress. Also, I can't recall who stayed holding up the banner " I can wear coquettishly, but you can't harass me."It's either this woman or other person. Some people are resentful of being blamed for wearing transparent clothes, so they assume it's unfair. At the end of the programme, Robb guessed that it could be the anwer a), nontheless he was totally wrong. The right answer was b). That's all I figured out from the podcast. She gave him three options: a) a pair of jeans, b) the little black dress, or c) a pair of high heels |
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Today is pleasant as usual, yet not all my days are so agreeable. |
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I listened to a brief English podcast related to dress code. |
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There were two people, named Robb and Jeniffer, discussing the topic. |
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As I understood, Robb prefers to wear casual clothing to work , such as jeans, casual trousers, t-shirts, etc. |
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The question was something like, "Which dress cannot be considered underdressed or over dressed?" In other words, which dress is really appropriate for all occasions ? |
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She gave him three options: a) a pair of jeans, b) the little black dress, or c) a pair of high heels. He said he had no idea which one fits, but he chose the answer a) as a guess. Afterwards, she stated that they would find out the answer at the end of the programme There was a miniblog post on the social network Weibo, the Chinese equivalent ( or rip - off ) of Twitter (I have no idea), about a woman in Shanghai, who wore a see-through dress on the metro. This has promoted lots of debates . Mainly, two opinions appeared among the people. The first one is that such a dress is should not be worn because it's extremely provocative and causes a bunch of unwanted comments. Another one is that people can dress however they like or prefer, and people can't judge them. Unsurprisingly, she was arrested for that, and 70% of people opposed wearing a transparent dress. Also, I recall someone held up the banner stating: " I can wear, but you can't harass me." It's either this woman or other person. Some people are resentful of being blamed for wearing transparent clothes, so they assume it's unfair. At the end of the programme, Robb guessed that it could be the answer a) ; nonetheless he was totally wrong. The right answer was b). That's all I figured out from the podcast. |
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There were two people, named Robb and Jennifer, discussing the topic. |
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Afterwards , Jennifer asked him what clothes women wear . |
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He replied a blouse and a skirt . |
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Namely they tend to dress in a more formal way, but, of course, some wear casual clothes. |
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Jennifer asked a question Robb from the Karl Lagerfeld's quote, which unfortunately I've already forgotten. |
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The question was something like, "Which dress cannot be considered underdressed or over dressed?" In other words, which dress is really appropriate for all occasions ? |
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The Importance of Dress Codes |
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