Aug. 8, 2025
The home
i live with family in an appartement , there are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room . i like my bedroom , there is a small bock shelf and a mirror . i study and watch movies sometimes in my room . my brother also likes to watch anime and plays video games in our room .
Our house is a great home .
iI live with my family in an appartement , t. There are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room .
I is always capital
iI like my bedroom , there is a small bocok shelf and a mirror .
iI study and watch movies sometimes in my room .
I would put sometimes at the beginning or end instead
mMy brother also likes to watch anime and plays video games in our room .
Our house is a great home .
The hHome
iI live with family in an appartement , t. There are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room .
iI like my bedroom ,; there is a small bock okshelf and a mirror .
iSometimes, I study and watch movies sometimes in my room .
mMy brother also likes to watch anime and plays video games in our room .
Our house is a great home .
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Awesome job! Only correct some bits of grammar - commas and full stops go next to the word (e.g., said, ended.). Amazing English :)
i live with family in an appartement , there are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room .
iI like my bedroom , there is a small bocok shelf and a mirror .
iI study and watch movies sometimes in my room .
mMy brother also likes to watch anime and plays video games in our room .
Our house is a great home .
iI live with my family in an appartement , there are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room .
iI like my bedroom , there is a small bock okshelf and a mirror .
iI study and sometimes watch movies sometimes in my room .
my brother also likes to watching anime and playsing video games in our room .
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Make sure to always write the pronoun "I" in capital
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i live with family in an appartement , there are three bedrooms , a kitchen , and a living room .
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i like my bedroom , there is a small bock shelf and a mirror .
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i study and watch movies sometimes in my room .
I would put sometimes at the beginning or end instead |
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my brother also likes to watch anime and plays video games in our room . my brother also likes
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