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Solen

July 29, 2025

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The Hiking Trip

Tokay I go in hiking trip for 7 hours. It was very long but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music. The weather was good too so it was agreable. I really like this day. We met a man who was funny. We ate eggs and bread.


Aujourd'hui je suis parti en randonnée pendant 7 heures. C'était très long mais c'était magnifique et j'adore marcher avec de la musique. Le temps était bon aussi donc c'était agréable. J'ai vraiment aimé cette journée. Nous avons rencontré un homme qui était drôle. Nous avons mangé des œufs et du pain.

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Tokday I go inwent on a hiking trip for 7 hours.

The weather was good too so it was agreeable.

I really liked this day.

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Watch your tense, when talking about an event that happened in the past, you need to use the past tense.

Tokday I go in hiking trip for 7 hourswent on a 7 hour hiking trip.

It was very long, but it was so beautiful, and I love to walk with music.

The weather was good too, so it was agreablepleasant.

I really liked this day.

We met a man who was funny.

We ate eggs and bread.

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I recommend combining your last two sentences. Also, since you're talking about something that already happened, keep it all in past tense :) other than that, great work!

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Solen

July 30, 2025

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Thanks a lot my friend !

Tokday I go inwent on a hiking trip for 7 hours.

It was very long but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music.

The weather was good too so it was agreablepleasant.

I really liked this oday.

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Great job, your English sounds really good.

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Solen

July 30, 2025

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Oh thank you so much !

The Hiking Trip

Tokday, I go inwent hiking trip for 7 hours.

'Go' is used for present tense
'Went' is used for past tense

It was very long, but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music.

The weather was good too, so it was agreablI had a good time.

I really liked this day.

We met a man who was funny.

We ate eggs and bread.

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Solen

July 30, 2025

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Thanks for your time !

The Hiking Trip


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Tokay I go in hiking trip for 7 hours.


Tokday, I go inwent hiking trip for 7 hours.

'Go' is used for present tense 'Went' is used for past tense

Tokday I go inwent on a hiking trip for 7 hours.

Tokday I go in hiking trip for 7 hourswent on a 7 hour hiking trip.

Tokday I go inwent on a hiking trip for 7 hours.

It was very long but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music.


It was very long, but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music.

It was very long but it was so beautiful and I love to walk with music.

It was very long, but it was so beautiful, and I love to walk with music.

The weather was good too so it was agreable.


The weather was good too, so it was agreablI had a good time.

The weather was good too so it was agreablepleasant.

The weather was good too, so it was agreablepleasant.

The weather was good too so it was agreeable.

I really like this day.


I really liked this day.

I really liked this oday.

I really liked this day.

I really liked this day.

We met a man who was funny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We ate eggs and bread.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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