I listened to this sad story, which was talking about a little swallow and a gold statue.

It was a very touching story, the prince gave up all his things, that he hasd for poor people, h. He gave up the world for something, which was more important.

He believed that these people and their needs were the most important, h. He put others before himself, then he taught the swallow also that, t. They gave up many things, such as Roby, eyes..... even their lifves.

I am not sure what you mean by "Roby" here.

I can't understand, how can someone be like that and. I don't know if itI will be good enough to wish that anyone becan looking like them or that I would be only a selfish behavior, but I. But I have been taught that when you really can do good things or help people, you should do that, don't say why I?

Instead of that, say why not?

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I listened to this sad story, which was talking about a little swallow and a gold statue.

Need past tense as other part of sentence is also in past.

It was a very touching story,: the prince gave up all everythings, that he hasd for poor people,; he gave up the world for something, which was more important.

'had' need past tense. Use semi-colons to link related sentence that don't use conjunctions like 'and' or 'or'. Use colons to to indicate that what follows it is an explanation or elaboration of what precedes it.

He believed that these people and their needs were the mostmore important,; he put others before himself, then he taught the swallow also that, tthat as well. They gave up many things,: Roby, eyes..... even their lifves.

Comparative need here. Comparing other peoples' needs with his own. Plural of life is lives. Not sure what 'Roby' is?

I can't understand, how can someone be like that, and I don't know if it willould be good to wish that anysomeone be lookings like them, or if that would be only a selfish behavior, but I was taught that when you really can do good things or help people, you should do that, d. Don't say, why should I?

'Would be' conditional. Not a certain thing. 'was taught' passive past tense needed as are the subject and the action happened to you. Need the 'should' or doesn't make sense.

Instead of that say, why not?

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It was a very touching story, t. The prince gave up all things, that he has fors things to poor people, h. He gave up the world for something, which was more important.

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I can't understand, how can someone can be like that and. I don't know if it will beis good to wish that anyone be lookingact like them or if that would be only be a selfish behavior, b. But I was taught that when you really can do good things or help people, you should do that, don't. Instead of saying “Why me?” say w“Why I?not?”

I listened to thisa sad story, which was talking about a little swallow and a gold statue.

the word "talking" was not incorrect, but unnecessary and sounded a little unnatural.

It was a very touching story, t. The prince gave up all everythings, that he hasd for poor people, h. He gave up the world for something, which was more important.

He believed that these people and their needs were the most important, h. He put others before himself,; then he taught the swallow also that, tthat same lesson. They gave up many things, Roby, (?), their eyes..... even their lifves.

I cadon't understand, how can someone can be like that, and I don't know if it will beis good to wish that anyone be lookingfor people to be like them, or if that would be only a selfish behavior, but Iselfish. But I (was?) taught that when you really can do good things or help people, you should do that. So, don't say "why I??" (or, "Why me?")

Sorry, I think I didn't entirely understand what you were saying here.

Instead of that, say "why not?"