Oct. 6, 2025
the happiness
happiness , this is the deeply word that everyone try to get it .
in my opinion , the happiness is feeling that make me continue in my live , achieve my goals , reach to the top .it is not just a laughing and joy ,also it is feeling relax , through your stress away , feeling responsibility ,safety, and peace inside .
in all of small point in your live ,there is a huge source of happiness ,in your exhausted work , your falling relationship , complex time , every thing include happiness if you see to the full part in your cup .
السعادة ، هذه كلمة عميقة يحاول كل شخص الحصول عليها .
برأيي الشخصي السعادة شعور يجعلني أستمر في حياتي ، أحقق اهدافي ، أصل للقمة .هيو ليس فقط شعور فرح وضحك ايضاً هو شعور بالراحة ، أن تلقي توترك بعيداً ، شعور بالمسؤولية ،الأمان ، والسلام الداخلي .
في كل نقطة صغيرة في حياتك يوجد منبع ضخم من السعادة، في عملك المتعب ، علاقاتك الفاشلة ، وقتك المعقد ، كل شيء يحتوي سعادة اذا نظرت للجزء الممتلئ من كأسك .
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I really liked it . And it really gives me a good feeling.
Oct. 11, 2025
thank you 🤍
the hHappiness
"Happiness" in general does not need "the."
"The happiness" signifies a specific happiness. For example, "the happiness I feel when I watch the sunset versus the happiness I feel when I watch the sunrise"
hHappiness , t. This is the deeplyone word that everyone tryies to get it understand.
"Deeply" is an adverb, for an adjective you would use "deep." I suggest instead to use "the one" which is used for emphasis and works naturally here
iIn my opinion , the happiness is a feeling that makes me continuepush forward in my live ,fe, to achieve my goals , to reach to the top .i. It is not just a laughingter and joy ,also it is, but also feeling relax ed, through yourwing my stress away , feeling responsibility , safety, and peace inside .
"Continue" doesn't feel strong enough for this sentiment, I suggest "push through"
iIn all ofevery small point inarea of your live ,fe, there is a huge source of happiness ,i. In your exhausteding work , your faliling relationship , (complex?) time , every thing includes happiness if you see tolook at the full part inof your cup .
I didn't know what you meant by "complex time," so I can't suggest an alternative
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Great job
Oct. 11, 2025
thank you 🙏
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the happiness
"Happiness" in general does not need "the." "The happiness" signifies a specific happiness. For example, "the happiness I feel when I watch the sunset versus the happiness I feel when I watch the sunrise" |
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happiness , this is the deeply word that everyone try to get it .
"Deeply" is an adverb, for an adjective you would use "deep." I suggest instead to use "the one" which is used for emphasis and works naturally here |
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in my opinion , the happiness is feeling that make me continue in my live , achieve my goals , reach to the top .it is not just a laughing and joy ,also it is feeling relax , through your stress away , feeling responsibility ,safety, and peace inside .
"Continue" doesn't feel strong enough for this sentiment, I suggest "push through" |
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in all of small point in your live ,there is a huge source of happiness ,in your exhausted work , your falling relationship , complex time , every thing include happiness if you see to the full part in your cup .
I didn't know what you meant by "complex time," so I can't suggest an alternative |
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