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The Hair Salon
I go to a hair salon nearby once every two month.
I'm a hair dresser, and I have my own salon, but I go to another hair salon when I get my hair done.
I go to the same salon where I've been visiting for quite a long time.
There are two hair dressers, and they are pretty talkative.
Whenever I visit, the same hair dresser is responsible for my hair.
I mean, every time, the same person cuts or colors my hair.
私は、二か月に一回近くの美容室に行きます。
私は、美容師で自分のお店を持っていますが、自分の髪をやってもらうときは、どこか別の美容室に行きます。
いつも同じ美容室に行きます。そこにはかなり長い間お世話になっています。
そこには二人の美容師さんがいて、彼らはかなりおしゃべりです。
いつも同じ美容師さんが私の髪を担当します。
行くたびに、同じ人が私の髪を切ったり染めたりする、という意味です。
I go to a hair salon nearby once every two months.
Since it is more than one month, it must be plural.
I'm a hair dresser, and I have my own salon, but I go to another hair salone when I get my hair done.
1. It is hairdresser, not hairdresser. 2. It's redundant, but not incorrect, to say "I have my own salon." Since you already establish the subject "I," it is smoother to not say it again. This also removed the need to create a second independent clause in the same sentence. 3. Since the objects of the sentence are hair salons, there's no need to say "hair salon" again. Saying "one" is the implicit object.
I go've been going to the same salon where I've been visiting for quite a long time.
This is just smoother. Saying "I go" and "I've been visiting" is a bit redundant when they refer to the same thing.
Whenever I visit, the same hair dresser is responsible for my hair.
It's one word.
I mean, every time, the same person cuts or colors my hair.
I would delete this sentence. This is saying the exact same thing as the previous one. You could also combine them to say, "Whenever I visit, the same hairdresser cuts and colors my hair every time," only if you don't want to lose the description of your hairdresser being the one who cuts and colors your hair.
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Great job! I would keep the sentences together in one paragraph.
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The Hair Salon
I go to a hair salon nearby once every two months.
I'm a hair dresser, and I have my own salon, but I go to another hair salon when I get my hair done.
I go to the same salon where that I've been visiting for quite a long time.
or, more naturally: "I go to the same salon I've always gone to for a long time now."
There are two hair dressers, and they are pretty talkative.
Whenever I visit, the same hair dresser is responsible for my hair.
I mean, every time, the same person cuts or colors my hair.
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Well done!
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Thank you so much for your corrections!
I go to a hair salon nearby once every twoother month.
Every two months is an option, but every other month is the not plural version
I go to the same salon where I've been visiting the same salon for quite a long time.
I've been visiting the same salon for quite a long time
There are twoBoth hair dressers, and theyre are pretty talkative.
Both hairdressers there are pretty talkative
Whenever I visit, the same hair dresser is responsible for my hair.
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Thank you so much for your corrections!
The Hair Salon
I go to a hair salon nearby once every two months.
I'm a hair dresser, and I have my own salon, but I go to another hair salon when I get my hair done.
I go to the same salon where every time, which I've been visiting for quite a long time.
There are two hair dressers, and they are pretty talkative.
Whenever I visit, the same hair dresser is responsible for my hair.
I mean, every time, the same person cuts or colors my hair.
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Excellent work!
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Thank you so much for your corrections!
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I go to the same salon where I've been visiting for quite a long time. I go to the same salon I I've been visiting the same salon for quite a long time I go to the same salon or, more naturally: "I go to the same salon I've always gone to for a long time now." I This is just smoother. Saying "I go" and "I've been visiting" is a bit redundant when they refer to the same thing. |
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I mean, every time, the same person cuts or colors my hair. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I would delete this sentence. This is saying the exact same thing as the previous one. You could also combine them to say, "Whenever I visit, the same hairdresser cuts and colors my hair every time," only if you don't want to lose the description of your hairdresser being the one who cuts and colors your hair. |
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