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I just arrive from the gym. Today, I was thinking about this topic. I've heard than many people feel attracted to go there for the possibility to take good photos for their social media, then show how health is their life.
This situation made me uncomfortable before because while I do my routine, my body and ugly face appear in their videos or photos (I'm only joking, I don't think I'm ugly now, hahaha). So, when people appeared with their big tripods in middle of the hall to take his photos or videos of themselves gave me so cringe!
Now, I'm looking for the good way of the things, I don't need to be and Ogre about everything, hahaha. I think that if going there only to took photos of your sexy body to your fans motivates you, then do it, go ahead, and obtain your sexy body to show for everyone!
P.D.: Still make me laugh when I see a guy taking sexy photos of whom probably his girlfriend, then she can post it on her social media. I don't know how these relationships work.
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Acabo de llegar del gimnasio. Hoy he estado pensando en este tema. He oído que a mucha gente le atrae ir allí por la posibilidad de tomar buenas fotos para sus redes sociales y luego mostrar lo saludable que es su vida.
Esta situación me incomodaba antes porque, mientras hacía mi rutina, mi cuerpo y mi feo rostro aparecían en sus videos o fotos (es broma, no creo que sea fea ahora, jajaja). Así que, cuando la gente aparecía con sus grandes trípodes en medio del pasillo para tomarse fotos o videos, ¡me daba mucha vergüenza ajena!
Ahora busco el lado bueno de las cosas, no necesito ser un ogro con todo, jajaja. Creo que si ir allí solo para tomar fotos de tu cuerpo sexy para tus fans te motiva, entonces hazlo, adelante, ¡y consigue ese cuerpo sexy para mostrarlo a todo el mundo!
P.D.: Todavía me da risa cuando veo a un chico tomando fotos sexys de quién probablemente sea su novia, para que ella las publique en sus redes sociales. No sé cómo funcionan estas relaciones.
Thank you for reading!! :D
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I don't know how these relationships work.
Thank you for reading!! :D
I just arrivereturned from the gym.
To arrive means to get somewhere, normally used when talking about heading somewhere, not returning. If you want to use that word though I guess you could say something like “I arrived back at my house”, but words like “return” sound better
I've heard thant many people feel attracted to go therethe gym for the possibility to take good photos for their social media, then and show how health is their life.
What you write was fine (minus the error with “that”), this just sounds a bit more natural
This situation has made me uncomfortable before, because while I do my routine, my body and ugly face appear in their videos or photos (I'm only joking, I don't think I'm ugly now, hahaha).
1. If you’re talking about something that has occurred in the past, you need to put “has” in front of a verb
2. The commas are places incorrectly here.
So, when people appeared with their big tripods in middle of the hall to take his photos or videos of themselves gave me, it felt so cringy to me!
When talking about emotions in English, we never say that something “gives” an emotion. We simply say something like “it makes me feel ___”
Now, I'm looking for the good way of thetrying to see the good in things,. I don't need to be and O ogre about everything, hahaha.
I get what you mean by “looking for the way of things”, but we would normally say a phrase like “I look for the good in things”
I also feel like this sentence sounds better when split into two.
I think that if going there only to tookake photos of your sexy body to show your fans motivates you, then do it, go ahead, and obtain your sexy body to show for everyone!
1. “To take” should be in the infinitive form
2. A verb like “to show” is missing from this part of the sentence
P.D.: SS., It still makes me laugh when I see a guy taking sexy photos of whom is probably his girlfriend, thenso she can then post it on her social media.
1. What made you laugh? You need to have a noun here
2. The last sentence is a bit complicated, but what you wrote sounded unnatural so I fixed it like so
I just arrivecame back from the gym.
You could also say "I just arrived home from the gym" but came back sounds more natural.
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This situationhas made me feel uncomfortable before because while I do my routine, my body and ugly face appear in their videos or photos. (I'm only joking, I don't think I'm ugly now, hahaha).
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In Spanish you say me da cringe in English you say it made me cringe
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PS means postscript, latin for written after.
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Thanks for correcting my writing! You write well, I just corrected it to how I would write it as a native speaker.
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