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mimigigi

April 2, 2025

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The Greatest Beer Run Ever

At first, I thought it was a comedy movie. However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there. It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats. The plot of the movie arrives when on a drinking night he speaks up and promises something crazy! He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days. All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.
The next part of the movie is he travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends. However, he didn't expect the horror time all of them were living. He viewed with his own eyes the terrific that a war could be and understood it a serious thing. In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tell it, and everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.

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However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there.

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on commercantile boats.ial shipping

"mercantile" comes across as either quite scientific or old fashioned depending on context, so I think commercial is better here. "Boats" to "shipping" is changed because "boats" makes people think of smaller vessels, but most trading is on larger vessels, which are better described as "ships".

The plot of the movie arrives whenbegins on a driunkingen night when he speaks up and promises something crazy!

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look upsearch for their neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

"look up" can mean different things depending the following word.

You can "look up at" something, like looking up at the sky or the ceiling.

Or you can "look up in" something, which means e.g. to look through a phonebook, website, dictionary, etc.

Or you can "look up to" someone (e.g. as a role model). There are also some things you can "look up to" where it means the same thing as "look up at", like stars, or poetically "the heavens".

You wouldn't really "look up for" something, however.

All of this was to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

The next part of the movie ishows heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

However, he didn't expect the (horrorible time / horrors) all of them were living.

We wouldn't say "horror time". You can say "horrible time" or "the horrors" here, but the meaning is a little different between the time. To say "the horrible time" would focus more on the day to day negative experience. e.g. the hard work of drills, or digging trenches. "horrors" is a lot more visceral in its meaning, and is used for stuff like war or natural disasters. It focuses people's mind much more on traumatic experiences like injury, death, destruction, etc.

He viewed with his own eyes the terrificor that a war could be and understood it was a serious thing.

"terrific" has meant "great/excellent" for a few hundred years now. You may find it listed as a synonym of terror in some dictionaries, but they should warn that that is an archaic usage.

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tellback to talk about it, and everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.

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Good job! Did you enjoy the movie?

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mimigigi

April 3, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback! Yeah, it was a great movie, and with Zac Efron as the main character :p

At first, I thought it was a comedy movie.

However I haven't watched many Vietnam war movies, so I find it interesting to knowlearn more about the war there.

Vietnam movies functions, but is a little bit vague. Until I got to the second half of your sentence, I thought maybe you meant Vietnamese movies (as in, movies made in Vietnam).

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to, working with engines on mercantile boats far away from the war.

This just sounds more natural to me.

The main plot of the movie arrivebegins when on a drinkhe speaks up during a night he speaks upof drinking and promises something crazy!

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for their enlisted neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then, and hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

neighbours is a fully valid spelling elsewhere in the world, but in my corner we don't use the u :)

All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

The next part of the movie is heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

However, he didn't expect the horrorific time all of them were lihaving.

He viewedsaw with his own eyes thehow terrific thatble a war could be and understood it as a serious thing.

In the end, he returned home, and e. Everyone was happy that he made itsurvived to tell it, and everyone was relievethe tale and that their friends were still alive.

However I haven't watched many Vietnamese movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there.

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats.

The plot of the movie arrivehappens when on a drinking night, he speaks up and promises something crazy!.

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like in the old days.

All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

TDuring the next part of the movie is, he travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

However, he didn't expect the horrorible time all of them were living.

He viewedsaw with his own eyes thehow terrific thatble a war could be and understood that it a serious thing.

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tell it, and ehis story. Everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.

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Well done! Keep it up!

The Greatest Beer Run Ever

At first, I thought it was a comedy movie.

However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting'm curious to know more about the war there.

If you're talking about being curious to know more about the war when you first came across the movie, you'd say, "...so I was curious to know more about the war there." If you're talking about being curious after watching the movie, my correction is what you'd say. I didn't know which one to use. ^^'

It is basicallyn summary, it's about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from.S. during the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats.

We know the U.S. is far away from where the war is happening, so it's best to use "during" to state that a war is happening while he did his service.

The plot of the movie arrives when on a drinking night he speaks up and promises something crazy!

He promiseds everyone there that he was going toill travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friendsearch for friends and neighbours enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

The next part of the movie is heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

You could also say, "In the next part of the movie, he is travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends."

However, he didn't expect the horror timeific conditions all of them were living in.

He viewedsaw with his own eyes the terrific that a war could beors of war and understood it as a serious thing.

In the previous line, you wrote "horror" so I replaced "terrific" with "terror."

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made itlived to tell it, and everyone wasthis experience. They were also relieved to know that their friends were still alive.

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Good job! Sounds like an interesting movie. ^^

At first, I thought it was a comedy movie.


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However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there.


However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting'm curious to know more about the war there.

If you're talking about being curious to know more about the war when you first came across the movie, you'd say, "...so I was curious to know more about the war there." If you're talking about being curious after watching the movie, my correction is what you'd say. I didn't know which one to use. ^^'

However I haven't watched many Vietnamese movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there.

However I haven't watched many Vietnam war movies, so I find it interesting to knowlearn more about the war there.

Vietnam movies functions, but is a little bit vague. Until I got to the second half of your sentence, I thought maybe you meant Vietnamese movies (as in, movies made in Vietnam).

However I haven't watched many Vietnam movies, so I find it interesting to know more about the war there.

The Greatest Beer Run Ever


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It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats.


It is basicallyn summary, it's about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from.S. during the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats.

We know the U.S. is far away from where the war is happening, so it's best to use "during" to state that a war is happening while he did his service.

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on mercantile boats.

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to, working with engines on mercantile boats far away from the war.

This just sounds more natural to me.

It is basically about an engineer who did his service in the US far away from the war and then dedicated his time to working with engines on commercantile boats.ial shipping

"mercantile" comes across as either quite scientific or old fashioned depending on context, so I think commercial is better here. "Boats" to "shipping" is changed because "boats" makes people think of smaller vessels, but most trading is on larger vessels, which are better described as "ships".

The plot of the movie arrives when on a drinking night he speaks up and promises something crazy!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The plot of the movie arrivehappens when on a drinking night, he speaks up and promises something crazy!.

The main plot of the movie arrivebegins when on a drinkhe speaks up during a night he speaks upof drinking and promises something crazy!

The plot of the movie arrives whenbegins on a driunkingen night when he speaks up and promises something crazy!

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.


He promiseds everyone there that he was going toill travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friendsearch for friends and neighbours enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for the neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like in the old days.

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look up for their enlisted neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then, and hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

neighbours is a fully valid spelling elsewhere in the world, but in my corner we don't use the u :)

He promised everyone there that he was going to travel to Vietnam, look upsearch for their neighbours and friends enlisted in the war, and then hand them a beer from his bag like the old days.

"look up" can mean different things depending the following word. You can "look up at" something, like looking up at the sky or the ceiling. Or you can "look up in" something, which means e.g. to look through a phonebook, website, dictionary, etc. Or you can "look up to" someone (e.g. as a role model). There are also some things you can "look up to" where it means the same thing as "look up at", like stars, or poetically "the heavens". You wouldn't really "look up for" something, however.

All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All of this to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

All of this was to show them respect and that they all are missed by their families and friends.

The next part of the movie is he travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.


The next part of the movie is heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

You could also say, "In the next part of the movie, he is travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends."

TDuring the next part of the movie is, he travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

The next part of the movie is heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

The next part of the movie ishows heim travelling and doing the impossible to find his friends.

However, he didn't expect the horror time all of them were living.


However, he didn't expect the horror timeific conditions all of them were living in.

However, he didn't expect the horrorible time all of them were living.

However, he didn't expect the horrorific time all of them were lihaving.

However, he didn't expect the (horrorible time / horrors) all of them were living.

We wouldn't say "horror time". You can say "horrible time" or "the horrors" here, but the meaning is a little different between the time. To say "the horrible time" would focus more on the day to day negative experience. e.g. the hard work of drills, or digging trenches. "horrors" is a lot more visceral in its meaning, and is used for stuff like war or natural disasters. It focuses people's mind much more on traumatic experiences like injury, death, destruction, etc.

He viewed with his own eyes the terrific that a war could be and understood it a serious thing.


He viewedsaw with his own eyes the terrific that a war could beors of war and understood it as a serious thing.

In the previous line, you wrote "horror" so I replaced "terrific" with "terror."

He viewedsaw with his own eyes thehow terrific thatble a war could be and understood that it a serious thing.

He viewedsaw with his own eyes thehow terrific thatble a war could be and understood it as a serious thing.

He viewed with his own eyes the terrificor that a war could be and understood it was a serious thing.

"terrific" has meant "great/excellent" for a few hundred years now. You may find it listed as a synonym of terror in some dictionaries, but they should warn that that is an archaic usage.

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tell it, and everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.


In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made itlived to tell it, and everyone wasthis experience. They were also relieved to know that their friends were still alive.

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tell it, and ehis story. Everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.

In the end, he returned home, and e. Everyone was happy that he made itsurvived to tell it, and everyone was relievethe tale and that their friends were still alive.

In the end, he returned home, and everyone was happy that he made it to tellback to talk about it, and everyone was relieved that their friends were still alive.

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