Feb. 21, 2022
ps:(This passage is my view about my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)
I want to say sorry first.Because I may have some comments on capitalism later
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is begins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.
This revolution has brought us great losses,But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better。
ps:(This passage is my view about my country’s The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)
First, I want to say sorry first.Bbecause I may have some comments on capitalism later.
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginsbegan May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pto prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.
This revolution has brought us great losses,. But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better。.
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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution
文化大革命在英文里头只是称为the Cultural Revolution
ps:(P.S. This passage is my view abouton my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution).
P.S. stands for postscript (post = after, script = writing), so anything with a P.S. (or P.P.S. etc.) will go at the end of a letter, not the beginning.
I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.
Don't apologize!
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginslasted from May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is P. Its objective was to prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofpath towards building socialism.
This revolution has broughtcaused us great losses,Bbut it is our growthhistory, and we believe that China will develop better。.
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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution
ps:(This passage is my view aboutpersonal opinion of my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution).
PS (postscript) should be toward the end of your text after your main text is finished :)
First, I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.
The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is began ins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pand lasted until October 1976. To be honest, this revolution was a bad idea, because it prevented the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofought only to building socialism, which was China's goal.
This revolution has brought us great losses,B, but it ishas also led to our growth, and weI believe that China will develop better。quickly.
If it leads to great losses, it cannot simultaneously also lead to growth, right? The two of those are opposite things.
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ps:(This passage is my view about my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)
PS (postscript) should be toward the end of your text after your main text is finished :)
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