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Feb. 21, 2022

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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution

ps:(This passage is my view about my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)

I want to say sorry first.Because I may have some comments on capitalism later

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is begins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.

This revolution has brought us great losses,But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better。

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ps:(This passage is my view about my country’s The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)

First, I want to say sorry first.Bbecause I may have some comments on capitalism later.

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginsbegan May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pto prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.

This revolution has brought us great losses. But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better.

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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution

文化大革命在英文里头只是称为the Cultural Revolution

ps:(P.S. This passage is my view abouton my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution.

P.S. stands for postscript (post = after, script = writing), so anything with a P.S. (or P.P.S. etc.) will go at the end of a letter, not the beginning.

I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.

Don't apologize!

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginslasted from May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is P. Its objective was to prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofpath towards building socialism.

This revolution has broughtcaused us great losses,Bbut it is our growthhistory, and we believe that China will develop better.

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liumuzhou

Feb. 23, 2022

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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution

Thank you!
From the beginning, I think this word should not be said in English because it is not “伟大”. Thank you for letting me know

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution

ps:(This passage is my view aboutpersonal opinion of my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution.

PS (postscript) should be toward the end of your text after your main text is finished :)

First, I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is began ins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pand lasted until October 1976. To be honest, this revolution was a bad idea, because it prevented the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofought only to building socialism, which was China's goal.

This revolution has brought us great losses,B, but it ishas also led to our growth, and weI believe that China will develop better。quickly.

If it leads to great losses, it cannot simultaneously also lead to growth, right? The two of those are opposite things.

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liumuzhou

Feb. 23, 2022

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This revolution has brought us great losses,B, but it ishas also led to our growth, and weI believe that China will develop better。quickly.

Sorry. I think my expression isn't good.
My mean,it taught us a lesson

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution


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The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution

文化大革命在英文里头只是称为the Cultural Revolution

ps:(This passage is my view about my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)


ps:(This passage is my view aboutpersonal opinion of my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution.

PS (postscript) should be toward the end of your text after your main text is finished :)

ps:(P.S. This passage is my view abouton my country’sThe Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution.

P.S. stands for postscript (post = after, script = writing), so anything with a P.S. (or P.P.S. etc.) will go at the end of a letter, not the beginning.

ps:(This passage is my view about my country’s The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution)

I want to say sorry first.Because I may have some comments on capitalism later


First, I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.

I want to say sorry first.B, because I may have some comments on capitalism later.

Don't apologize!

First, I want to say sorry first.Bbecause I may have some comments on capitalism later.

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is begins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.


The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is began ins May 1966 to October 1976.Actually this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pand lasted until October 1976. To be honest, this revolution was a bad idea, because it prevented the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofought only to building socialism, which was China's goal.

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginslasted from May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is P. Its objective was to prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road ofpath towards building socialism.

The Great Proletarian Cultural Revolution is beginsbegan May 1966 to October 1976. Actually, this revolution is wrong, its blackboard is Pto prevent the restoration of capitalism and seek China's own road of building socialism.

This revolution has brought us great losses,But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better。


This revolution has brought us great losses,B, but it ishas also led to our growth, and weI believe that China will develop better。quickly.

If it leads to great losses, it cannot simultaneously also lead to growth, right? The two of those are opposite things.

This revolution has broughtcaused us great losses,Bbut it is our growthhistory, and we believe that China will develop better.

This revolution has brought us great losses. But it is our growth and we believe that China will develop better.

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