Aug. 3, 2020
the government chasing the short term income.
The reason which the human doesn't willing to confront the influents of the pollution from the thriving industry, shrug off the warming, and insist to dig its heels, is that they were attracted by a short term blockbuster income.
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tThe government is chasing the short term income.
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tThe government chasis thinking in the short -term income.
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Aug. 4, 2020
thank your feedback. thank you :D
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the government chasing the short term income.
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The reason which the human doesn't willing to confront the influents of the pollution from the thriving industry, shrug off the warming, and insist to dig its heels, is that they were attracted by a short term blockbuster income. The reason wh
This flows a bit better to me. |
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