Aug. 22, 2021
The Good Doctor
I'm watching the series "The Good Doctor" season 1&2 recently. It is said that its creator in chief are the same as the series "Doctor House", which I love very much, so that's the reason why I watch it.
But I am very disappoited at it. I think it is much worse than "Doctor House". It wanted to show too many aspects but every point was like a dragonfly kiss the water surface. Otherwise, it was too optimistic as the heroes movie. There were always good news, miracle, the doctors could always figure out solutions quickly.
And the dialogues seems much like the books saled in the airport, "How to make your life better" "How to run a relationship" and so on. Furthermore, I think it beautified the autism excessively.
What make me drepress is a scenario that a girl came to hospital alone because she was circumcised at the age of two. She used a fake ID card so that her parents would not stop her asking for help. Looking back on the news of Afghan, who knows how many girls will undergo circumcision. Damn it.
I'm watchingve recently been watching seasons 1 & 2 of the series "The Good Doctor" season 1&2 recently."
It is said that its creator in chief areThe creator of this show is the same as that of the series "Doctor House", which I love very much, so that'. This is the reason why I decided to watch it.
ButHowever, I am very disappointed atin it.
It wanteds to show too many aspects but every point wasof hospital life and so every point is superficial, like a dragonfly kissing the water's surface.
OtherwiseIn addition, it wais too optimistic as the , like a superheroes movie.
There wereis always good news, miracle,s, and the doctors couldan always figure out solutions quickly.
And tThe dialogues seems much like the self-help books saleold in the airport,: "How to make your life better", "How to run a relationship" and so on.
Furthermore, I think it beautified theglorifies autism excessively.
What make meOne scenario that drepress is a scenario thated me was when a girl came to hospital alone because she was circumcised at the age of two.
Looking back on the recent news ofrom Afghanistan, who knows how many girls will undergo circumcision.
Damn it.
Feedback
Great work! I changed many of your tenses to the present as we tend to refer speak about movies and TV shows in the present, even if we watched them in the past.
Nov. 29, 2021
Thank you.
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The Good Doctor |
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I'm watching the series "The Good Doctor" season 1&2 recently. I' |
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It is said that its creator in chief are the same as the series "Doctor House", which I love very much, so that's the reason why I watch it.
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But I am very disappoited at it.
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I think it is much worse than "Doctor House". |
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It wanted to show too many aspects but every point was like a dragonfly kiss the water surface. It want |
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Otherwise, it was too optimistic as the heroes movie.
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There were always good news, miracle, the doctors could always figure out solutions quickly. There |
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And the dialogues seems much like the books saled in the airport, "How to make your life better" "How to run a relationship" and so on.
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Furthermore, I think it beautified the autism excessively. Furthermore, I think it |
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What make me drepress is a scenario that a girl came to hospital alone because she was circumcised at the age of two.
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She used a fake ID card so that her parents would not stop her asking for help. |
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Looking back on the news of Afghan, who knows how many girls will undergo circumcision. Looking back on the recent news |
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Damn it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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