July 16, 2021
The Glass Bead Game
Previously, my senior suggested to me to read a book, the Glass bead game.
The book is written by the well known author, Hermann Hesses.
I have read three times, but I still don't understand completely.
But I focused on the game which is described in the book.
The glass bead game is a result of high thoughts and meditations.
Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads.
At first, I thought that it is similar like the Go game or else, but I can't image it.
Today, I find out that connecting contents between notes are similar the game.
When I connect the notes, I can make ideas and inspirations which are so beautiful sound in my brain.
I feel like I am a master of the game in this moment.
Like making nice sound of glass beads, I want to make nice ideas of my notes.
The Glass Bead Game
Previously, mMy senior once suggested to me to read a book, that I should read The Glass bBead gGame.
The book is written by the well known author, Hermann Hesses.
I have read it three times, but I still don't understand it completely.
But I focused on the game which is described in the book.
The glass bead game is a result of high thoughtsmade of intense thinking and meditations.
Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads.
I don't fully understand this sentence unfortunately.
At first, I thought that it iwas similar like the Go game or elseto Go, but I can't imagpicture it.
"to picture" is a much more common verb to use instead of "to image"
Today, I fiound out that connecting the contents betweof different notes areis similar to how the game works.
When I connect the notes, I can make ideas and inspirations which are socome up with such beautiful souand in my brainspiring ideas.
You can't really "make" inspirations. Something can be inspiring, but creating inspirations is not correct usage of the term.
Right now, I feel like I am a master ofat the game in this moment.
Like making nice sound ofs with glass beads, I want to make nice ideas ofwith my notes.
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Good attempt :)
July 17, 2021
Thank you very much.
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Previously, my senior suggested to me to read a book, the Glass bead game.
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The book is written by the well known author, Hermann Hesses. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have read three times, but I still don't understand completely. I have read it three times, but |
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But I focused on the game which is described in the book. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The glass bead game is a result of high thoughts and meditations. The glass bead game is |
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Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads. Masters can play beautiful sound with glass beads. I don't fully understand this sentence unfortunately. |
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At first, I thought that it is similar like the Go game or else, but I can't image it. At first, I thought that it "to picture" is a much more common verb to use instead of "to image" |
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Today, I find out that connecting contents between notes are similar the game. Today, I f |
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When I connect the notes, I can make ideas and inspirations which are so beautiful sound in my brain. When I connect You can't really "make" inspirations. Something can be inspiring, but creating inspirations is not correct usage of the term. |
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I feel like I am a master of the game in this moment. Right now, I feel like I am a master |
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Like making nice sound of glass beads, I want to make nice ideas of my notes. Like making nice sound |
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