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Ducky

Nov. 15, 2021

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The Gift

Last Saturday I wanted to buy a gift for a nephew for his eighth birthday. I thought in a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew a shop of table games. Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think in other possibles shops. I went to "plaça del Pi" where there are a lot of little boutiques. I didn't found nothing, but in a boutique, they gave me an adress. The spot was near, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in the number seven. This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games. I was talking with the saleswoman who show me several options of games. Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game. I think is very complete for a kid. The gift we will give him next sunday. I am sure, it will like he a lot.

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The Gift

Last Saturday, I wanted to buy a gift for amy nephew for his eighth birthday.

Although grammatically correct, it sounds a bit odd to say "a nephew" instead of "my nephew"

I thought inof buying him a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew there was a shop of table games.

Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think inof other possibles shops.

I went to "plaça del Pi" where there are a lot of little boutiques.

I didn't fouind noanything, but in a boutique, they gave me an address.

You can say "didn't find anything" or "found nothing"

The spot was nearclose by, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in theat number seven.

This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games.

I was talking with the saleswoman who showed me several options of games.

Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game.

I think is very completeenough for a kid.

The gift wWe will give him the gift next sSunday.

I am sure, it he will like heit a lot.

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I'm sure he will really like it!

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Ducky

Nov. 16, 2021

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Thanks for the corrections and feedback.

The Gift


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Last Saturday I wanted to buy a gift for a nephew for his eighth birthday.


Last Saturday, I wanted to buy a gift for amy nephew for his eighth birthday.

Although grammatically correct, it sounds a bit odd to say "a nephew" instead of "my nephew"

I thought in a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew a shop of table games.


I thought inof buying him a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew there was a shop of table games.

Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think in other possibles shops.


Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think inof other possibles shops.

I went to "plaça del Pi" where there are a lot of little boutiques.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn't found nothing, but in a boutique, they gave me an adress.


I didn't fouind noanything, but in a boutique, they gave me an address.

You can say "didn't find anything" or "found nothing"

The spot was near, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in the number seven.


The spot was nearclose by, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in theat number seven.

This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was talking with the saleswoman who show me several options of games.


I was talking with the saleswoman who showed me several options of games.

Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game.


Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game.

I think is very complete for a kid.


I think is very completeenough for a kid.

The gift we will give him next sunday.


The gift wWe will give him the gift next sSunday.

I am sure, it will like he a lot.


I am sure, it he will like heit a lot.

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