Nov. 15, 2021
Last Saturday I wanted to buy a gift for a nephew for his eighth birthday. I thought in a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew a shop of table games. Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think in other possibles shops. I went to "plaça del Pi" where there are a lot of little boutiques. I didn't found nothing, but in a boutique, they gave me an adress. The spot was near, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in the number seven. This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games. I was talking with the saleswoman who show me several options of games. Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game. I think is very complete for a kid. The gift we will give him next sunday. I am sure, it will like he a lot.
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Last Saturday, I wanted to buy a gift for amy nephew for his eighth birthday.
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The spot was nearclose by, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in theat number seven.
This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games.
I was talking with the saleswoman who showed me several options of games.
Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game.
I think is very completeenough for a kid.
The gift wWe will give him the gift next sSunday.
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I'm sure he will really like it!
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Last Saturday I wanted to buy a gift for a nephew for his eighth birthday. Last Saturday, I wanted to buy a gift for Although grammatically correct, it sounds a bit odd to say "a nephew" instead of "my nephew" |
I thought in a chess game, so I went to "Barri Gòtic" in the centre of Barcelona, where I knew a shop of table games. I thought |
Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think in other possibles shops. Unfortunately, it was closed, so I began to think |
I went to "plaça del Pi" where there are a lot of little boutiques. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I didn't found nothing, but in a boutique, they gave me an adress. I didn't f You can say "didn't find anything" or "found nothing" |
The spot was near, in a beautiful street named "carrer Petritxol", in the number seven. The spot was |
This was a gorgeous shop with a lot of classic table games. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I was talking with the saleswoman who show me several options of games. I was talking with the saleswoman who showed me several options of games. |
Finally, I was choose a wood box game that included a chess with the pieces of wood, a parcheesi game, game of the goose, and a backgammon game. Finally, I |
I think is very complete for a kid. I think is |
The gift we will give him next sunday.
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I am sure, it will like he a lot. I am sure |
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