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The Fours Step to Improving my Academic Writing

How can I use other people’s ideas in my writing? Other people’s ideas can be a foundation for an essay; a kind of base for writing an academic text. However, plagiarism should be avoided. The main principles help to adopt those ideas in academic text are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing. So, what kind of preference should student have here? Key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in the quotation, because long quotation shows that student cannot separate useful information from useless and the teacher can have a conclusion that student cannot think critically. Sometimes paraphrasing and summarizing are the better options. These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and base in the essay. Two core strategies are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.

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The Foursth Step to Improving my Academic Writing

First, second, third, fourth, etc.

"Fours" would just be a plural of the number four.

How can I use other people’s ideas in my writing?

Other people’s ideas can be a foundation for an essay; a kind of base for writing an academic text.

You don't really need the second part of the sentence since you convey the same idea through "a foundation for an essay". Otherwise if you did keep it a semicolon wouldn't be the right choice since I think a semicolon connects two independent clauses (or basically things that could just be their own sentence).

However, plagiarism should be avoided.

The main principles that help to adopt those ideas in academic texts are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing.

You need "that" because you're listing the main principles. If you were just saying that the main principles help to adopt those ideas, or how they do that.

So, what kind of preference should students have here?

Or "a student" could work as well.

KA key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in theof the length of each quotation, because a long quotation shows that the student cannot separate useful information from useless information, and the teacher can have areach the conclusion that the student cannot think critically.

You need an article before "key approach", and since there are other key approaches, "a" would be the best choice (it has the same effect as "one of the key approaches".

You would "keep track of (something)", although when "track" is used alone, you don't need "of" (that would make grammatical sense here, but it doesn't feel right here given the context)

"the length" or "the amount" because it's a specific quantity/measurement (applying specifically to each quotation).

With you original, I would say "words" instead of "numbers", as "numbers" is both very nonspecific (what are the numbers counting?) and kind of becomes redundant here since "amount" implies that it would be related to numbers ("amount" can often be replaced with "number").

"the quotation" --> "each quotation" because "the quotation" makes it sound like you're only talking about one, specific quotation and no others. "Each" shows that you're still only concentrating on one at a time, but overall you may look at many (depending on the number of quotations).

"a long quotation shows" or "long quotations show" (both general, and both work).

"the student" because you need an article (since it's singular), and it's a specific student (a student that has used a long quotation).

I think that because you say "useful information", you should also say "useless information". But anyone would still be able to understand what you meant as you originally had it.

I added in a comma to break the sentence up slightly, but that's optional.

I would say something like "reach" instead of "have" because it would show the link between the student using a long quotation and the teacher having that conclusion a little more clearly. ("have a conclusion" wouldn't give any idea of when or why they reached/created that conclusion).

"the conclusion": "the" because it's a specific conclusion (not just any random one, but the one where they feel that the student can't think critically).


OPTIONAL: I think you could also use "quote" and "quotation" alternatively. Traditionally (and maybe more formally), "quote" is a verb, but it is now also often used as a noun (the shortened version of "quotation").

Sometimes paraphrasing and summarizing are the better options.

These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and base in the essay.

I think this would be ok, but I would probably recommend adding a little more information to "base"

Two core strategies that are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.

You're listing the two core strategies, so you would add in "that".

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Good job! An additional point on this: if you wanted to add some more detail after the sentence about them forming the foundation of an essay before you start talking about plagiarism, since other people's ideas would often come from some kind of text, or could be found in one, especially when writing a formal essay, you could say something about how quotes/quotations add textual evidence to an essay, which strengthens any points that are made (as the textual evidence (other people's ideas) is used to support any of your own points).

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asfero

Oct. 9, 2024

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That's exactly what I meant when I said about the foundation. I like how it sounds 'textual evidence' :)
Thank you for help

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Oct. 9, 2024

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No problem! English teachers say it a lot when you have to write essays because it includes techniques as well as quotes, both of which are needed in every body paragraph.

The Foursth Step to Improving my Academic Writing

How can I use other people’s ideas in my writing?

Other people’s ideas can be athe foundation for an essay;, a kind of base for writing an academic text.

However, plagiarism should be avoided.

The main principles help to adopt those ideas in academic text are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing.

So, what kind of preference should student have here?

KA key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in theof length of each quotation, because a long quotation shows that the student cannot separate useful information from useless information and the teacher can have aonclude [or, come to the conclusion] that the student cannot think critically.

Sometimes paraphrasing and summarizing are the better options.

These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and a base inof knowledge to the essay.

Two core strategies that are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.

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asfero

Oct. 9, 2024

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Thank you for help

The Fours Step to Improving my Academic Writing


The Foursth Step to Improving my Academic Writing

The Foursth Step to Improving my Academic Writing

First, second, third, fourth, etc. "Fours" would just be a plural of the number four.

How can I use other people’s ideas in my writing?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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Other people’s ideas can be a foundation for an essay; a kind of base for writing an academic text.


Other people’s ideas can be athe foundation for an essay;, a kind of base for writing an academic text.

Other people’s ideas can be a foundation for an essay; a kind of base for writing an academic text.

You don't really need the second part of the sentence since you convey the same idea through "a foundation for an essay". Otherwise if you did keep it a semicolon wouldn't be the right choice since I think a semicolon connects two independent clauses (or basically things that could just be their own sentence).

However, plagiarism should be avoided.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sometimes paraphrasing and summarizing are the better options.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and base in the essay.


These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and a base inof knowledge to the essay.

These three techniques help to add intelligibility, authority and base in the essay.

I think this would be ok, but I would probably recommend adding a little more information to "base"

Two core strategies are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.


Two core strategies that are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.

Two core strategies that are applied for paraphrasing are changing the worlds and transforming the grammar.

You're listing the two core strategies, so you would add in "that".

The main principles help to adopt those ideas in academic text are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing.


The main principles help to adopt those ideas in academic text are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing.

The main principles that help to adopt those ideas in academic texts are: using direct quotation, paraphrasing and summarizing.

You need "that" because you're listing the main principles. If you were just saying that the main principles help to adopt those ideas, or how they do that.

So, what kind of preference should student have here?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So, what kind of preference should students have here?

Or "a student" could work as well.

Key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in the quotation, because long quotation shows that student cannot separate useful information from useless and the teacher can have a conclusion that student cannot think critically.


KA key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in theof length of each quotation, because a long quotation shows that the student cannot separate useful information from useless information and the teacher can have aonclude [or, come to the conclusion] that the student cannot think critically.

KA key approach is to keep track an amount of numbers in theof the length of each quotation, because a long quotation shows that the student cannot separate useful information from useless information, and the teacher can have areach the conclusion that the student cannot think critically.

You need an article before "key approach", and since there are other key approaches, "a" would be the best choice (it has the same effect as "one of the key approaches". You would "keep track of (something)", although when "track" is used alone, you don't need "of" (that would make grammatical sense here, but it doesn't feel right here given the context) "the length" or "the amount" because it's a specific quantity/measurement (applying specifically to each quotation). With you original, I would say "words" instead of "numbers", as "numbers" is both very nonspecific (what are the numbers counting?) and kind of becomes redundant here since "amount" implies that it would be related to numbers ("amount" can often be replaced with "number"). "the quotation" --> "each quotation" because "the quotation" makes it sound like you're only talking about one, specific quotation and no others. "Each" shows that you're still only concentrating on one at a time, but overall you may look at many (depending on the number of quotations). "a long quotation shows" or "long quotations show" (both general, and both work). "the student" because you need an article (since it's singular), and it's a specific student (a student that has used a long quotation). I think that because you say "useful information", you should also say "useless information". But anyone would still be able to understand what you meant as you originally had it. I added in a comma to break the sentence up slightly, but that's optional. I would say something like "reach" instead of "have" because it would show the link between the student using a long quotation and the teacher having that conclusion a little more clearly. ("have a conclusion" wouldn't give any idea of when or why they reached/created that conclusion). "the conclusion": "the" because it's a specific conclusion (not just any random one, but the one where they feel that the student can't think critically). OPTIONAL: I think you could also use "quote" and "quotation" alternatively. Traditionally (and maybe more formally), "quote" is a verb, but it is now also often used as a noun (the shortened version of "quotation").

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