Aug. 31, 2023
The First Time I Learned English
I started studying English when I was in the first year of middle school.
My first English teacher was called Muyun. He was an old man, and it was said that he was retired, and hired by the middle school.
He didn’t teach me long. I think maybe it was just a semester. After he left the school, a young English teacher came. He graduated from a normal school. I felt his English was better than the first one.
He liked playing table tennis and he could play very well. Maybe that was why I have played table tennis since I was in middle school.
On the high school entrance examination, English only accounted for 50 points. I got 32.25 points.
Recalling the first time learning English is very interesting. It reminds me of many people and things. For example, an English sentence l learned in middle school and I can never forget is “Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang”.
The First Time I Learned English
I started studying English when I was in thein my first year of middle school.
My first English teacher was callnamed Muyun.
He was an old man, and i. It was said that he was retired, and hired by the middle school.
It's a little long as one sentence, but still understandable.
He didn’t teach me for very long.
I think maybe it was just a semester.
You can include "maybe", but because you said "I think", it's already implied that you are unsure.
After he left the school, a young English teacher camereplaced him.
He graduated from a normal school.
I'm not sure what a "normal" school means here.
I felt his English was better than the first oneteacher.
He liked playing table tennis and he could play very well.
Maybe that was why I have played table tennis since I was in middle school.
On the high school entrance examination, English only accounted for 50 points.
I got 32.25 points.
Recalling themy first time learning English is very interesting.
It reminds me of many people and things.
For example, an English sentence l learned in middle school and I canthat I will never forget is, “Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang”.”
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This was interesting to read and I could understand it entirely. Nice job!
Aug. 31, 2023
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The First Time I Learned English
I started studying English when I was in themy first year of middle school.
My first English teacher was called's name was Muyun.
He was an old man, and it was said that he was formerly retired, and hired by the middle school.
Formerly shows that he was previously retired
He didn’t teach meus long.
"Us" indicates the whole class, unless he was a private teacher
I think maybe it was just a semester.
"I think" already shows the uncertainty of the statement.
After he left the school, a young English teacher came.
He graduated from a normtypical school.
Normal is unclear and is different depending on where people come from, what type of school? Liberal arts, engineering, be more specific to help the reader. I put typlical because it sounds better but would prefer a certain school overall.
I felt that his English was better than the first one.
He liked playing table tennis and he could play very well.
Maybe that was why I have played table tennis since I was in middle school.
On the high school entrance examination, English only accounted for 50 points.
Out of how many points?
During the exam, I got 32.25 points.
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Recalling theI remember lessons I learned when I think back to my first time learning English is very interesting.
When you have an example following a sentence, make it relate more. The former sentence seemed quite vague.
It reminds me of many people and things.
For example, an English sentence l learned in middle school and I canthat I'll never forget is “Dongfanghong tractors are made in Luoyang”.
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Overall, very well done. The story was clear so I wasn't confused as to what was taking place. In that sense you can communicate effectively and efficiently all your working on now is the fluidity which comes with more practice. Keep it up!
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He didn’t teach me long. He didn’t teach me for very long. He didn’t teach "Us" indicates the whole class, unless he was a private teacher |
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I think maybe it was just a semester. I think "I think" already shows the uncertainty of the statement. I think You can include "maybe", but because you said "I think", it's already implied that you are unsure. |
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Recalling the first time learning English is very interesting.
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It reminds me of many people and things.
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