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The First Snow of My Living City
It's snowing outside. I am watching through the window, the ground has been white already and the cars parking beside the road are covered with snow. It is so beautiful and gives me a quiet feeling. Cars passed the road beside our house occasionally, left deep tire tracks in the fresh snow. The kindergarten across still has its lights on, and there are people working. I opened a weather forecast APP and noticed that the snow will not stop until the day after tomorrow. I have no idea if the high speed way will be closed tomorrow and whether I could drive back to my work city. My wife told me safety is first and I completely agree with her. So I don't worry whether I could go back to work anymore, if I couldn't I will take a day off.
The First Snow of My Living City
It's snowing outside.
I am watching through the window, the ground has been white already and the cars parking beside the road are covered with snow.
It is so beautiful and gives me a quiet feeling.
Cars passed the road beside our house occasionally, and left deep tire tracks in the fresh snow.
The kindergarten across still has its lights on, and there are people working.
I opened a weather forecast APPapp, and noticed that the snow will not stop until the day after tomorrow.
I have no idea if the high speed way will be closed tomorrow, and whether I could drive back to my work citythe city where I work.
My wife told me safety is first and I completely agree with her.
So I don't worry whether I could go back to work anymore, if I couldan't , I will take a day off.
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We don't usually have a word for the city in which you live vs the one in which you work.
The First Snow of My Living City
It's snowing outside.
I am watching through the window, the ground has been white already and the cars parking beside the road are covered with snow.
It is so beautiful and gives me a quiet feeling.
Cars passed the road beside our house occasionally, left deep tire tracks in the fresh snow.
The kindergarten across still has its lights on, and there are people working.
I opened a weather forecast APP and noticed that the snow will not stop until the day after tomorrow.
I have no idea if the high speed way will be closed tomorrow and whether I could drive back to my work city.
My wife told me safety is first and I completely agree with her.
So I don't worry whether I could go back to work anymore, if I couldn't I will take a day off.
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The First Snow of My Living City
I'm not sure what you mean by "Living City"...perhaps you mean the city that you live in? You can just say "My City" and it will mean the same thing.
It's snowing outside.
I am watching through the window, t. The ground has beenis white already and the cars parking beside the road are covered with snow.
It's probably best to make this two separate sentences.
It is so beautiful and gives me a quiet feeling.
Cars passedSome cars drove down the road beside our house occasionally, and left deep tire tracks in the fresh snow.
The kindergarten across still has its lights on, and there are people working.
I opened a weather forecast APPapp and noticed that the snow will not stop until the day after tomorrow.
I have no idea if the high speed way will be closed tomorrow and whether I could drive back to my work city.the city where I work.
We typically call the major route that you're referencing a "highway", at least where I live.
You can say "the city where I work" - we don't typically say "living city" and "work city".
My wife told me that safety icomes first, and I completely agree with her.
So I don''m not worryied about whether I cshould go back to work anymore, i. If I cshouldn't , I will take a day off.
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Great job! You painted a lovely scene. I could definitely picture all the snow accumulating. Just made a few corrections to improve the writing a bit. Let me know if you have questions!
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Cars passed the road beside our house occasionally, left deep tire tracks in the fresh snow.
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