July 2, 2025
Primordial human in one of the nights, try to sleep his ear on the ground while laying in cave. But at the moment one get the silence, begins to hear a sound between his ear and th stone he laying on . He become afraid and move away his ear with a sudden rush and the sound vanishes. Later when he lay down on his side to the ground he begin to notice the sound again. A sound constantly repeating. A short speating with the same intervals. This human hears own hearthbeat. And mimicking start which is biggest proof of humans are coming from monkeys. Human comes to coclusion this sound is stemming from two object is hitting eachother whereas the human get a stone and hit it to ground with the aim of repating the sound in his ear , he heard. For a while he does it accordingly. The only musical element in here is repetition. Repetition is the rhythym. And the rhythym is the what he heard in his ear. Later this sound evolved into new slower or faster rhythyms. And humankind comes to modern drums from this repetiton of hitting sounds.Even create nowadays drum'n'bass style. This is the story of music. When i was interested şn music i was important archives in my brain. But its over. Now I only listen my heartbeat. My favourite and only listened the group of ' The Veins'.Excellent Orchestra. They are playin non-stop.Uncapricious. Whenever I want.
The First Rhythm.
Primordial human in one of the nights, trylying in a cave trying to sleep, his ear on the ground while laying in cave.
Chickens lay eggs; people lie down.
"Trying to sleep" would be the correct phrasing of your original sentence, but the order I've suggested feels more natural to me.
But at the moment one get the silence,silence falls, he begins to hear a sound between his ear and the stone he is laying on .
He becomes afraid and move aways his ear away with a sudden rush, and the sound vanishes.
Later when he layies down on, his side to the ground, he begins to notice the sound again.
A sound constantly repeating.
A short speatking with the same intervals.
Not sure if you intend "speaking" or "beating" here; either would work.
This human hears his own hearthbeat.
"This human" feels a bit forced (though not wrong), but it could be a stylistic choice.
And he starts mimicking start, which is the biggest proof of humans are comingcame from monkeys.
Human comes to the conclusion this sound is stemming from two object is hitting each other whereas. So the human gets a stone and hit it to ground with the aim ofstrikes the ground, trying to repeating the sound in his ear , he hhe heard in his eard.
For a while he does it accordingsteadily.
Not sure your intention with "accordingly," which doesn't fit here. I would suggest something like "steadily" if you are attempting to say that he beats the stone in time with the rhythm of his heartbeat.
The only musical element in here is repetition.
Repetition is the rhythym.
And the rhythym is the what he heard in his ear.
Later, this sound evolved into new slower or faster rhythyms.
And humankind comes to modern drums from this repetiton of hitting sounds. Even create nowadaysing modern drum'n'bass style.
This is the story of music.
When iI was interested şin music i was, I read important archives in my brain.
Not sure what you mean by "I was archives"
But it's over.
Now I only listen to my heartbeat.
My favourite and only listenedmusic is the group of ' 'The Veins'.' Excellent Oorchestra.
They are playing non-stop. Uncapricious.
But at the moment one get the silence, begins to hear a sound between his ear and th stone he laying on . But |
He become afraid and move away his ear with a sudden rush and the sound vanishes. He becomes afraid and move |
Later when he lay down on his side to the ground he begin to notice the sound again. Later when he l |
A sound constantly repeating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The only musical element in here is repetition. The only musical element |
The First Rhythm. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Primordial human in one of the nights, try to sleep his ear on the ground while laying in cave. Primordial human in one of the nights, Chickens lay eggs; people lie down. "Trying to sleep" would be the correct phrasing of your original sentence, but the order I've suggested feels more natural to me. |
A short speating with the same intervals. A short spea Not sure if you intend "speaking" or "beating" here; either would work. |
This human hears own hearthbeat. This human hears his own heart "This human" feels a bit forced (though not wrong), but it could be a stylistic choice. |
And mimicking start which is biggest proof of humans are coming from monkeys. And he starts mimicking |
Human comes to coclusion this sound is stemming from two object is hitting eachother whereas the human get a stone and hit it to ground with the aim of repating the sound in his ear , he heard. Human comes to the conclusion this sound is stemming from two object is hitting each other |
For a while he does it accordingly. For a while he does it Not sure your intention with "accordingly," which doesn't fit here. I would suggest something like "steadily" if you are attempting to say that he beats the stone in time with the rhythm of his heartbeat. |
Repetition is the rhythym. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
And the rhythym is the what he heard in his ear. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Later this sound evolved into new slower or faster rhythyms. Later, this sound evolved into new slower or faster rhythyms. |
And humankind comes to modern drums from this repetiton of hitting sounds.Even create nowadays drum'n'bass style. And humankind comes to modern drums from this repetiton of hitting sounds. Even creat |
This is the story of music. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
When i was interested şn music i was important archives in my brain. When Not sure what you mean by "I was archives" |
But its over. But it's over. |
Now I only listen my heartbeat. Now I only listen to my heartbeat. |
My favourite and only listened the group of ' The Veins'.Excellent Orchestra. My favourite and only |
They are playin non-stop.Uncapricious. They are playing non-stop. Uncapricious. |
Whenever I want. |
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