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The first language exchange

The first language exchange
I will write daily summary about Harry Potter. Right now, I am reading Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the first chapter: Harry tell us about his summers at his uncle’s house. The Harry’s uncle were very cruel to him, while Harry was in uncle’s house harry couldn’t practice his magic exercises

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TFor the first language exchange
, I will write a daily summary about "Harry Potter."

If you're writing about one thing specifically, be sure to add "a" or "an" in front of it (e.g. "a song," "an assignment," "a task," etc.). Also, the way I wrote "For the first language exchange" helps lead your sentence into its main point.

Right now, I am reading the first chapter of "Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the first chapter:," where Harry tells us about his summers at his uncle’s house.

If you can, italicize book titles. Otherwise, put quotation marks around them like I did so readers know you're discussing a work of art or something.

The Harry's uncle wereas very cruel to him,; while Harry was in his uncle’s house h, Harry couldn’t practice his magic exercises.

If you want to keep this as part of one sentence, you can add a semicolon (;) like I did. If not, you can split them up with a period and capitalize "While."

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Grammatical errors aside, this was fun to read! I'm glad you're engaging with "Prisoner of Azkaban" like this!

The first language exchangeMy First Post

language exchange = do it with another person
writing on this website = like a blog, like social media

The first language exchange ¶
I will write daily summary
In this post, I will write about Harry Potter.

Right now, I am reading Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban i. In the first chapter:, Harry tell us about his summers at his uncle’s house.

colons are used for lists
example:

I have the following things: dogs, cats, dragons.

use commas

The Harry’s uncle wereas very cruel to him, and while Harry was in his uncle’s house h, Harry couldn’t practice his magic. exercises

were is plural
Harry's uncle is the subject, it's singular, so it becomes was

The first language exchange


The first language exchangeMy First Post

language exchange = do it with another person writing on this website = like a blog, like social media

The fFirst lLanguage eExchange

The first language exchange I will write daily summary about Harry Potter.


The first language exchange ¶
I will write daily summary
In this post, I will write about Harry Potter.

TFor the first language exchange
, I will write a daily summary about "Harry Potter."

If you're writing about one thing specifically, be sure to add "a" or "an" in front of it (e.g. "a song," "an assignment," "a task," etc.). Also, the way I wrote "For the first language exchange" helps lead your sentence into its main point.

Right now, I am reading Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the first chapter: Harry tell us about his summers at his uncle’s house.


Right now, I am reading Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban i. In the first chapter:, Harry tell us about his summers at his uncle’s house.

colons are used for lists example: I have the following things: dogs, cats, dragons. use commas

Right now, I am reading the first chapter of "Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban in the first chapter:," where Harry tells us about his summers at his uncle’s house.

If you can, italicize book titles. Otherwise, put quotation marks around them like I did so readers know you're discussing a work of art or something.

The Harry’s uncle were very cruel to him, while Harry was in uncle’s house harry couldn’t practice his magic exercises


The Harry’s uncle wereas very cruel to him, and while Harry was in his uncle’s house h, Harry couldn’t practice his magic. exercises

were is plural Harry's uncle is the subject, it's singular, so it becomes was

The Harry's uncle wereas very cruel to him,; while Harry was in his uncle’s house h, Harry couldn’t practice his magic exercises.

If you want to keep this as part of one sentence, you can add a semicolon (;) like I did. If not, you can split them up with a period and capitalize "While."

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