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blizzi

April 23, 2024

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The first experience

I never forgot the first time when I was at the front seat in a car. It is happened when I was a 13 years old. My grandfather had had an old car an on the one day he called me in a garage. At first I was so excited, tough shortly after got at front seat I was frustrated. I was overwhelmed by a number of different levers and switches. I was frightening to do somesing wrong. Took a deep breath I managed to start the engine and driven from the spot. Road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.


Я никогда не забуду первый раз когда я сел за руль автомобиля. Это случилось когда мне было 13 лет. У моего дедушки был старый автомобиль и в один день он позвал меня в гараж. Сначала я очень обрадовался, но когда сел за руль то впал в ступор. Я был перегружен огромным количеством разных рычагов и переключателей. Я очень боялся сделать что-то не так. Глубоко вдохнув я все же сумел завести машину и тронуться с места. Поездка длилась недолго. Но я никогда не забуду этот опыт.

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I’ll never forgoet the first time when I was atI sat in the front seat inof a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car, an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after got atI sat in front seat I was frustrated.

I was frighteninged to do somesthing wrong.

Tookaking a deep breath, I managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I wouldill never forget this experience.

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Nice job!

I will never forgotet is the first time when I was at the front seat in a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atetting into the front seat I was frustrated.

I was frightening to doed of doing somesthing wrong.

TI took a deep breath and I managed to start the engine and drioven from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

I never forgot the first time when I was atin the front seat inof a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car and on the one dayday it happened he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atin the front seat I was frustrated.

I was frightening to do somesthing wrong.

TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

Feedback

Good job!

TheMy first experience in the driver's seat

I'll never forgoet the first time when I was atin the frontdriver's seat inof a car.

The "front seat" usually means the passenger seat. I think you mean the "driver's seat."

(It is happened when) I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather hadused to hadve an old car, and on the oneat day, he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after got at frontI sat in the driver's seat, I wasgot frustrated.

I was overwhelmed by athe number of different levers and switches.

I was frightening to doterrified of doing somesthing wrong.

Tookaking a deep breath, I managed to start the engine and start drivening from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

Feedback

I'm glad you were able to drive safely at 13, haha!

I'll never forgoet the first time when I was atI sat in the front seat inof a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atI sat in the front seat I was frustrated.

I was overwhelmed by athe number of different levers and switches.

Your original sentence is technically correct -- but "the" sounds a bit more natural than "a" here.

I was afrighteningaid to do somesthing wrong.

A note on "frightening" -- you can describe things or events as "frightening," but when talking about your feelings, you would use "frightened." In this case, "afraid" is a little more natural-sounding, so I used that in my correction.

TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

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blizzi

April 23, 2024

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Thank you for your checking

I never forgot the first time when I was at the front seat in a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in athe garage.

At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after I got atin the front seat I was frustrated.

I was afrightening to doaid of doing somesthing wrong.

TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

blizzi's avatar
blizzi

April 23, 2024

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Thank you for your checking

The first experience


TheMy first experience in the driver's seat

I never forgot the first time when I was at the front seat in a car.


I never forgot the first time when I was at the front seat in a car.

I'll never forgoet the first time when I was atI sat in the front seat inof a car.

I'll never forgoet the first time when I was atin the frontdriver's seat inof a car.

The "front seat" usually means the passenger seat. I think you mean the "driver's seat."

I never forgot the first time when I was atin the front seat inof a car.

I will never forgotet is the first time when I was at the front seat in a car.

I’ll never forgoet the first time when I was atI sat in the front seat inof a car.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.


It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

(It is happened when) I was a 13 years old.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

It is happened when I was a 13 years old.

My grandfather had had an old car an on the one day he called me in a garage.


My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in athe garage.

My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

My grandfather hadused to hadve an old car, and on the oneat day, he called me in ato the garage.

My grandfather had had an old car and on the one dayday it happened he called me in ato the garage.

My grandfather had had an old car an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

My grandfather had had an old car, an on thed one day he called me in ato the garage.

At first I was so excited, tough shortly after got at front seat I was frustrated.


At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after I got atin the front seat I was frustrated.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atI sat in the front seat I was frustrated.

At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after got at frontI sat in the driver's seat, I wasgot frustrated.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atin the front seat I was frustrated.

At first I was so excited, though shortly after got atetting into the front seat I was frustrated.

At first I was so excited, toughbut shortly after got atI sat in front seat I was frustrated.

I was overwhelmed by a number of different levers and switches.


I was overwhelmed by athe number of different levers and switches.

Your original sentence is technically correct -- but "the" sounds a bit more natural than "a" here.

I was overwhelmed by athe number of different levers and switches.

Road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.


RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

RThe road wasn't long, but I would never forget this experience.

RThe road wasn't long, but I wouldill never forget this experience.

I was frightening to do somesing wrong.


I was afrightening to doaid of doing somesthing wrong.

I was afrighteningaid to do somesthing wrong.

A note on "frightening" -- you can describe things or events as "frightening," but when talking about your feelings, you would use "frightened." In this case, "afraid" is a little more natural-sounding, so I used that in my correction.

I was frightening to doterrified of doing somesthing wrong.

I was frightening to do somesthing wrong.

I was frightening to doed of doing somesthing wrong.

I was frighteninged to do somesthing wrong.

Took a deep breath I managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.


TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

Tookaking a deep breath, I managed to start the engine and start drivening from the spot.

TI took a deep breath Iand managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

TI took a deep breath and I managed to start the engine and drioven from the spot.

Tookaking a deep breath, I managed to start the engine and driven from the spot.

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