TheMy first day ofbeing 20

"The first day of 20" means that there are 20 days and you are talking about day 1.

Dear journal, today iI turned 20 years old.,

Sso iI have decided to write something for this speacial day and to improve my eEnglish.

Actually, my ability tof understand eEnglish is very good, but iI don't think iI am not really good at speaking or writing because iI don't really practisce them.

I still make mistakes even when using the most basic grammar topicpoints.

However i, I know people will help me to correct them even though it is wrong to read someone else's journal :).

TheMy first day of 20being 20 years old.

Dear journal, today iI turned 20 years old.

So i have decided to write something for this exclusivespecial day and to improve my eEnglish.

Actually my capability tof understanding e English is very good but iI don't think iI am not really good at speaking or writing it because iI don't really practise themce.

İ amI still makinge mistakes even atin the most basic grammartical topics.

and iHowever, I know people will help me to correct them even though it is wrong to read someone else's journal :).

Although common online, starting sentences with a conjunction (And, but) is formally incorrect. English speakers get around this by changing the structure of the sentence, or putting words or phrases like "HOwever", "That being said". I absolutely understand it though - just important to know that if you were writing a formal letter, that this sentence would look a bit out of place! The same thing goes with the capitalised "i".

TheMy first day of 20as a 20 year old

Dear journal, today iI turned 20 years old.

So iI have decided to write something for this exclusivespecial day and to improve my eEnglish.

Languages are always capitalized, as is "I".

Actually my capabilty ofI am able to understanding e English is very goodwell, but iI don't think iI am not really good at speaking or writing because iI don't really practisce themse skills..

"don't" must always have an apostrophe. "Don't" is short for "do not", and the apostrophe shows us something is missing, just like "I'm" (I am), "you're" (you are), "we'll" (we will), etc.

İ amI still makinge mistakes even atwith the most basic grammar topics.

aAnd iI know people will help me to correct them even it is normally wrong to read someone else's journal :).