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carolinafuentealba

Dec. 31, 2020

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The first day

This morning my friend told me "why is people talking about the new year? If only other day".
I didn't say anything her but I have been thinking about this all day.
I would like to beleive in the energy. Also thinking about the future and ours goal it is a good idea.
In the life there are some rituals for example you give a ring at your girlfriend some people celebrate especial birthay and other celebrate the new year... in fact even other simple new day is a gift.

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This morning my friend tolasked me "why isare people talking about the new year?

Told implies something different to Asked ,
or you could say why is everyone talking about the new year

If only- It is just other day".

I would like to beleieve in the energy.

Also thinking about the future and ours goal its is a good idea.

In theDuring life, there are some rituals for example: you give a ring ato your girlfriend, some people celebrate especial birthday s, and others celebrate the new year... in fact even other simple new I think every new ordinary day is a gift.

' During ' is a very nice word to use in writing.
re give a ring at " you throw things AT a person - maybe a ball, but you give things TO a person

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A nice topic and very current, Best wishes for your studies.

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carolinafuentealba

Dec. 31, 2020

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Thanks!! All the best for you too.

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pio

Dec. 31, 2020

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If only- It is just other day".

It is just another day".

The first day


This morning my friend told me "why is people talking about the new year?


This morning my friend tolasked me "why isare people talking about the new year?

Told implies something different to Asked , or you could say why is everyone talking about the new year

If only other day".


If only- It is just other day".

I didn't say anything her but I have been thinking about this all day.


I would like to beleive in the energy.


I would like to beleieve in the energy.

Also thinking about the future and ours goal it is a good idea.


Also thinking about the future and ours goal its is a good idea.

In the life there are some rituals for example you give a ring at your girlfriend some people celebrate especial birthay and other celebrate the new year... in fact even other simple new day is a gift.


In theDuring life, there are some rituals for example: you give a ring ato your girlfriend, some people celebrate especial birthday s, and others celebrate the new year... in fact even other simple new I think every new ordinary day is a gift.

' During ' is a very nice word to use in writing. re give a ring at " you throw things AT a person - maybe a ball, but you give things TO a person

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