Feb. 23, 2024
I'm happy to introduce myself to you all for the first time.
I would like to write about my first experiences.
Please imagine the embryology.
We are only a cell made by a sperm and an egg.
It becomes a fish-like form, then an amphibian (frog?), a bird(chicken?), then a mammal (animal?), and finally it becomes a human form.
It is simply said, “Ontogeny repeats phylogeny.”
That is, I was a fish, then a frog, then a bird, then a mammal, and after that, I finally became a human baby in my mother’s womb.
We have always experienced the first things even after we were born in this world.
For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one year old after we come out of this world.
And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future when it's time to say goodbye.
Life is the opposite phenomenon of the law of entropy.
Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but "life" moves in the opposite direction.
Most people say we should live along with nature.
However, “life” itself is against the nature.
For example, we are inhaling Oxygen and exhaling Carbon dioxide every moment.
The people who think about SDGs consider that the cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs.
However, why don’t they say about human CO2?
So I think the ultimate eco-friendly, SDG is to reduce the population of the earth.
Jonathan Swift wrote in his article ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive in the famine.
The population of the earth will increase and make a peak around 2050, then after leveling off, it will start to decrease from around 2100.
Anyway, we are experiencing new things every day.
初めて皆さんに自己紹介ができることを嬉しく思います。
私の初体験について書きたいと思います。
発生学を想像してみてください。
私たちは精子と卵子によって作られた細胞にすぎません。
魚型になり、両生類(カエル?)、鳥類(鶏?)になり、哺乳類(動物?)になり、最後に人間の姿になります。
一言で言えば「個体発生は系統発生を繰り返す」です。
つまり、私は魚からカエル、鳥、哺乳類を経て、ついに母親の胎内で人間の赤ちゃんになりました。
私たちはこの世に生まれてからも、常に初めてのことを経験してきました。
例えば、私たちはこの世から生まれて1歳の頃に初めて立って歩けるようになります。
そして、私たちはベッドに横たわり、将来、別れの時が来て初めて歩くことができなくなります。
生命はエントロピーの法則とは逆の現象です。
自然界のあらゆるものはエントロピーを増大させる方向に動くが、「生命」はその逆の方向に進む。
ほとんどの人は、私たちは自然とともに生きるべきだと言います。
しかし、「命」そのものが自然に反している。
たとえば、私たちは常に酸素を吸入し、二酸化炭素を吐き出しています。
SDGsを考える人たちは牛のCO2がSDGsの問題だと考えています。
しかし、なぜ人間の二酸化炭素については言わないのでしょうか?
ですから、究極の環境に優しいSDGは、地球の人口を減らすことだと思います。
ジョナサン・スウィフトは、「控えめな提案」という記事の中で、アイルランド人は飢餓で生き残るために自分の赤ん坊を食べるべきだと書いた。
地球の人口は増加し、2050年頃にピークを迎え、横ばいになった後、2100年頃から減少に転じます。
とにかく、私たちは毎日新しいことを経験しています。
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I'm happy to introduce myself to you all for the first time.
I would like to write about my first experiences.
Please imagine the embryology.
We are only a cell made by a sperm and an egg.
It becomes a fish-like form, then an amphibian (frog?
), a bird(chicken?
), then a mammal (animal?
), and finally it becomes a human form.
It is simply said, “Ontogeny repeats phylogeny.” That is, I was a fish, then a frog, then a bird, then a mammal, and after that, I finally became a human baby in my mother’s womb.
We have always experienced the first things even after we were born in this world.
For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one year old after we come out of this world.
And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future when it's time to say goodbye.
Life is the opposite phenomenon of the law of entropy.
Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but "life" moves in the opposite direction.
Most people say we should live along with nature.
However, “life” itself is against the nature.
For example, we are inhaling Oxygen and exhaling Carbon dioxide every moment.
The people who think about SDGs consider that the cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs.
However, why don’t they say about human CO2?
So I think the ultimate eco-friendly, SDG is to reduce the population of the earth.
Jonathan Swift wrote in his article ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive in the famine.
The population of the earth will increase and make a peak around 2050, then after leveling off, it will start to decrease from around 2100.
Anyway, we are experiencing new things every day.
The first (3)
I'm happy to introduce myself to you all for the first time.
I would like to write about my first experiences.
Please imagine the embryology.
We are only a cell made by a sperm and an egg.
It becomes a fish-like form, then an amphibian (frog?)
), a bird (chicken?)
),and then a mammal (animal?)
), and fFinally, it becomes atakes on the human form.
It is simply said, “Ontogeny repeats phylogeny.” That is, I was a fish, then a frog, then a bird, then a mammal, and after that, I finally became a human baby in my mother’s womb.
We have always experienced these first things even after we weare born into this world.
For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one year old after we come out ofinto this world.
And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future when it's time to say goodbye.
Life is the opposite phenomenon of the law of entropy.
Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but "life" moves in the opposite direction.
Most people say we should live along with nature.
However, “life” itself is against the nature.
For example, we are inhaling Ooxygen and exhaling Ccarbon dioxide every moment.
The people who think about SDGs consider that thecarbon dioxide emitted by cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs.
However, why don’t they saytalk about carbon dioxide created by human CO2s?
So, I think the ultimate eco-friendly, SDG is to reduce the population of the earth.
Jonathan Swift wrote in his article ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive in the famine.
The population of the earth will increase and make a peak around 2050, then after leveling off, it will start to decrease from around 2100.
Anyway, we are experiencing new things every day.
Please imagine the embryologybeginning of life.
If we used embryology it would mean "Please imagine the study of the development of an embryo from the stage of ovum fertilization through to the fetal stage." I don't think you want people to imagine a whole branch of study. My guess is you want them to think of what is being studied, not imagining the study of what you're studying. If that makes any sense.
I think any of the following sentences would make a little more sense.
"Please imagine the beginning of life"
"Please imagine the fertilization process"
"Please imagine life before becoming a fetus"
A more poetic way might be
"Please, imagine for a moment, before you were born, before you were a fetus in the womb"
ItThat cell becomes a fish-like form, then an amphibian (frog?)
"That cell" rather than "It" helps clarify what is turning into a "fish-like" form.
), a bird (chicken?)
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), then a mammal (animal?)
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), and finally it becomes a human form.
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We have always experienced the first things even after we were born in this world.
I am not entirely sure what is meant here. It could be interpreted as "We have always experienced firsts even after we are born in this world."
"Firsts" in this case tends to refer to all of a baby's "Firsts" so first steps, first words, first sentence, etc. I don't know why we omit "things" in there, but it's generally just referred to as "Firsts" like "baby's firsts"
For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one -year old after we come out intof this world.
Minor punctuation correction, saying "out of this world" implies we are no longer in this world, to say "into this world" implies that we have entered this world.
And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future, when it's time to say goodbye.
minor punctuation helps break up the sentence making the meaning a little more clear.
Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but "life" moves in the opposite direction.
Life doesn't need to be in quotes, if you would like a greater emphasis on life, then capitalizing the L in "Life" works better. That might be subjective.
However, “life” itself is against the nature.
Life doesn't need to be in quotes, if you would like a greater emphasis on life, then capitalizing the L in "Life" works better. That might be subjective. "Nature" is a more generalized term, saying "The Nature" is more specific, like "The Nature of Mankind" or "The Nature of that breed of dog" by saying "Nature" without "the" tends to imply more of a "Mother Nature" type of nature.
For example, we are inhaling Ooxygen and exhaling Ccarbon dioxide every moment.
Chemicals such as "oxygen" and "carbon dioxide" do not need to be capitalized unless they are the first word in a sentence.
The people who think about SDGs consider that the cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs.
Looking up SDG I'm seeing "sustainable development goals". I recommend to either be more specific about which of those goals cattle's CO2 is harming and rather than say "the cattle's CO2 is the problem of SDGs" I would say "the cattle's CO2 is one of the problems harming this goal" with "this goal" being whatever specific SDG goal you are referring to. Also if you aren't referring to "sustainable development goals" then I'm not sure what you mean by SDG.
However, why don’t they say that about human CO2?
"that" here helps clarify that you're asking why aren't people saying that human CO2 is a problem as well.
So, I think the ultimate eco-friendly, SDG solution to reach the SDG goal is to reduce the population of the earth.
Minor punctuation correction.
It doesn't define what is the ultimate eco-friendly is, it could be a person, product, plant, so I clarified it by adding "solution to reach" to show that you are talking about the ultimate eco-friendly is referring to a solution that will help reach the SDG goal. I added "goal" because while it is redundant to have the word "goal" in the acronym as well as a word added on the end, since we aren't hearing what those words represent, it sounds odd without the "goal" word.
Jonathan Swift wrote in his article, ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive in the famine.
Minor punctuation correction.
"survive in the famine" makes it sound like the famine is a specific place/area/location rather than a natural disaster. I would say "survive during the famine" or "survive the famine"
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Please imagine the embryology. Please imagine the If we used embryology it would mean "Please imagine the study of the development of an embryo from the stage of ovum fertilization through to the fetal stage." I don't think you want people to imagine a whole branch of study. My guess is you want them to think of what is being studied, not imagining the study of what you're studying. If that makes any sense. I think any of the following sentences would make a little more sense. "Please imagine the beginning of life" "Please imagine the fertilization process" "Please imagine life before becoming a fetus" A more poetic way might be "Please, imagine for a moment, before you were born, before you were a fetus in the womb" Please imagine Please imagine |
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It becomes a fish-like form, then an amphibian (frog?
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), a bird(chicken?
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), then a mammal (animal?
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), and finally it becomes a human form.
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It is simply said, “Ontogeny repeats phylogeny.” That is, I was a fish, then a frog, then a bird, then a mammal, and after that, I finally became a human baby in my mother’s womb. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We have always experienced the first things even after we were born in this world. We have always experienced the first things even after we were born in this world. I am not entirely sure what is meant here. It could be interpreted as "We have always experienced firsts even after we are born in this world." "Firsts" in this case tends to refer to all of a baby's "Firsts" so first steps, first words, first sentence, etc. I don't know why we omit "things" in there, but it's generally just referred to as "Firsts" like "baby's firsts" We This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one year old after we come out of this world. For example, we can stand up and walk for the first time around when we are one Minor punctuation correction, saying "out of this world" implies we are no longer in this world, to say "into this world" implies that we have entered this world. For example, we can stand This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
So I think the ultimate eco-friendly, SDG is to reduce the population of the earth. So, I think the ultimate eco-friendly Minor punctuation correction. It doesn't define what is the ultimate eco-friendly is, it could be a person, product, plant, so I clarified it by adding "solution to reach" to show that you are talking about the ultimate eco-friendly is referring to a solution that will help reach the SDG goal. I added "goal" because while it is redundant to have the word "goal" in the acronym as well as a word added on the end, since we aren't hearing what those words represent, it sounds odd without the "goal" word. So, I think the ultimate eco-friendly This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future when it's time to say goodbye. And we lie on a bed and can't walk for the first time in the future, when it's time to say goodbye. minor punctuation helps break up the sentence making the meaning a little more clear. And we lie on a bed and can't walk This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Life is the opposite phenomenon of the law of entropy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but "life" moves in the opposite direction. Everything in nature moves to increase entropy, but Life doesn't need to be in quotes, if you would like a greater emphasis on life, then capitalizing the L in "Life" works better. That might be subjective. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Most people say we should live along with nature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
However, “life” itself is against the nature. However, Life doesn't need to be in quotes, if you would like a greater emphasis on life, then capitalizing the L in "Life" works better. That might be subjective. "Nature" is a more generalized term, saying "The Nature" is more specific, like "The Nature of Mankind" or "The Nature of that breed of dog" by saying "Nature" without "the" tends to imply more of a "Mother Nature" type of nature. However, “life” itself is against However, “life” itself is against |
For example, we are inhaling Oxygen and exhaling Carbon dioxide every moment. For example, we are inhaling Chemicals such as "oxygen" and "carbon dioxide" do not need to be capitalized unless they are the first word in a sentence. For example, we are inhaling This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The people who think about SDGs consider that the cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs. The people who think about SDGs consider that the cattle’s CO2 is the problem of SDGs. Looking up SDG I'm seeing "sustainable development goals". I recommend to either be more specific about which of those goals cattle's CO2 is harming and rather than say "the cattle's CO2 is the problem of SDGs" I would say "the cattle's CO2 is one of the problems harming this goal" with "this goal" being whatever specific SDG goal you are referring to. Also if you aren't referring to "sustainable development goals" then I'm not sure what you mean by SDG. The people who think about SDGs consider that This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Jonathan Swift wrote in his article ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive in the famine. Jonathan Swift wrote in his article, ”A Modest Proposal” that the Irish should eat their babies to survive Minor punctuation correction. "survive in the famine" makes it sound like the famine is a specific place/area/location rather than a natural disaster. I would say "survive during the famine" or "survive the famine" This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The population of the earth will increase and make a peak around 2050, then after leveling off, it will start to decrease from around 2100. The population of the earth will increase and This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Anyway, we are experiencing new things every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
However, why don’t they say about human CO2? However, why don’t they say that about human CO2? "that" here helps clarify that you're asking why aren't people saying that human CO2 is a problem as well. However, why don’t they This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
初めて皆さんに自己紹介ができることを嬉しく思います。 私の初体験について書きたいと思います。 発生学を想像してみてください。 私たちは精子と卵子によって作られた細胞にすぎません。 魚型になり、両生類(カエル?)、鳥類(鶏?)になり、哺乳類(動物?)になり、最後に人間の姿になります。 一言で言えば「個体発生は系統発生を繰り返す」です。 つまり、私は魚からカエル、鳥、哺乳類を経て、ついに母親の胎内で人間の赤ちゃんになりました。 私たちはこの世に生まれてからも、常に初めてのことを経験してきました。 例えば、私たちはこの世から生まれて1歳の頃に初めて立って歩けるようになります。 そして、私たちはベッドに横たわり、将来、別れの時が来て初めて歩くことができなくなります。 生命はエントロピーの法則とは逆の現象です。 自然界のあらゆるものはエントロピーを増大させる方向に動くが、「生命」はその逆の方向に進む。 ほとんどの人は、私たちは自然とともに生きるべきだと言います。 しかし、「命」そのものが自然に反している。 たとえば、私たちは常に酸素を吸入し、二酸化炭素を吐き出しています。 SDGsを考える人たちは牛のCO2がSDGsの問題だと考えています。 しかし、なぜ人間の二酸化炭素については言わないのでしょうか? ですから、究極の環境に優しいSDGは、地球の人口を減らすことだと思います。 ジョナサン・スウィフトは、「控えめな提案」という記事の中で、アイルランド人は飢餓で生き残るために自分の赤ん坊を食べるべきだと書いた。 地球の人口は増加し、2050年頃にピークを迎え、横ばいになった後、2100年頃から減少に転じます。 とにかく、私たちは毎日新しいことを経験しています。 I'm happy to introduce myself to you all for the first time. |
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