June 15, 2025
The father's day
Today was the father's day in Venezuela. My mother and me cooked a fish's salad for my father. He doesn't know anything and we surprised him. Was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it. Happy holiday!
Hoy fue el día del padre en Venezuela. Mi madre y yo preparamos una ensalada de pescado para mi padre. El no sabía nada y nosotros lo sorprendimos. Fue un gran día y todos en mi familia lo disfrutamos. ¡Feliz día!
The fFather's dDay
Today was the fFather's dDay here in Venezuela.
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WIt was a great day, and all of my famimy entire family thoroughly enjoyed it.
Happy holidFather's Day!
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Very good! I made some edits to include words that may make slightly more sense or add flair to what you wrote. ¡Bien hecho!
Today was the father's day in Venezuela.
Today was Father's Day in Venezuela!
My mother and me cooked a fish's salad for my father.
My mother and I cooked my father a fish salad.
He doesn't know anything and we surprised him.
All of it was a suprise for him.
Was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it.
Today was a great day enjoyed with all of my family!
Happy holiday!
Notes: Happy Holidays are only used during Christmas time.
The fFather's dDay
We usually capitalize holiday names.
Today was the fFather's dDay in Venezuela.
My mother and meI cooked a fish's salad for my father.
"I" is the subject pronoun (the person doing the action). "Me" is the object pronoun (receiving the action).
He doesidn't know anything and, so we surprised him.
"doesn't" is present tense. But, you're telling a story, so you should use past tense: "didn't"
WIt was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it.
Happy holidFather's Day!
We say "Happy Holidays" only around Christmas time. Other than that, we say specific holiday names: "Happy Father's Day" or "Happy Easter", for example.
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Great job!!
The fFather's dDay
Today was the fFather's dDay in Venezuela.
My mother and me cookedI made a fish's salad for my father.
He doesidn't know anything andbout it, so we surprised him.
This is a stylistic remark and not a grammatical one. But if you wanted to develop this story further, consider trying to describe the way the father felt before finding the surprise and the way he felt after, and how he expressed his gratitude. This would sound more natural, but obviously may require using more complicated language than you are able to right now.
WIt was a great day and; all of my family enjoyed it.
Happy holidays!
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Good work! Good luck on your studies!
June 16, 2025
Oops, I realized I should've corrected the last line to "Happy Father's Day"
The fFather's dDay
Today was the fFather's dDay in Venezuela.
My mother and me cookedI made a fish's salad for my father.
He doesidn't know anythingbout it and we surprised him.
WIt was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it.
Happy holidFather's Day!
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Good job.
The fFather's dDay
We don't tend to put articles in front of holidays unless we are talking about one specific past holiday, as if we're telling a story about something from a long time ago.
Today was the fFather's dDay in Venezuela.
My mother and meI cooked a fish's salad for my father.
He doesidn't know anything and we surprised him.
WIt was a great day and all of mymy whole family enjoyed it.
Happy holidFather's Day!
"Happy holiday," sounds strange. We do say, "Happy holidays," to mean all of the holidays in December, though!
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Good writing. Happy Father's Day!
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The father's day
We don't tend to put articles in front of holidays unless we are talking about one specific past holiday, as if we're telling a story about something from a long time ago.
We usually capitalize holiday names.
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Was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it.
Was a great day and all of my family enjoyed it. Today was a great day enjoyed with all of my family!
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Happy holiday! Happy "Happy holiday," sounds strange. We do say, "Happy holidays," to mean all of the holidays in December, though! Happy Happy holidays! Happy We say "Happy Holidays" only around Christmas time. Other than that, we say specific holiday names: "Happy Father's Day" or "Happy Easter", for example. Happy holiday! Notes: Happy Holidays are only used during Christmas time. Happy |
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