Aug. 23, 2025
The fashion industry has a bad effect on people. Do u agree?
The fashion industry has become one of the most relevant aspects in our lives. Gradually more people base their persona or job on this field, but do its perks mask the bad effects? I firmly believe that people give too much importance to this industry, besides the negative repercussions it has on society.
Firstly, the way you dress, style your hair or do your make up can impact on people's first impression of you. In my opinion, nowadays, we worship people's appearance more than their personality and that can stop us from knowing them better. In addition to this, look can change based on class, culture and personal taste, so it should not affect relationships.
Moreover, the price of clothes is in constantly rising, making it harder for people to afford those. Even in fast fashion price are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment.
However, the fashion industry not only gives people more jobs opportunities, but it is a way to express ourselves, just like any other art.
To sum up, I agree that fashion industry has more downsides than benefits, although, if handled good, it is an important tool in society
The fashion industry has a bad effect on people. YDo you agree?
The fashion industry has become one of the most relevant aspects in our lives.
Gradually more people base their persona or job on this field, but do its perks mask the bad effects?
I firmly believe that people give too much importance to this industry, besidesregardless of the negative repercussions it has on society.
Firstly, the way you dress, style your hair or do your make up cahas an on impact on people's first impression of you.
In my opinion, nowadays, we worship people's appearance more than their personality and that can stop us from knowing them better.
In addition to this, looks can change based on class, culture and personal taste, so it should not affect [our] relationships.
Moreover, the price of clothes is in constantly rising, making it harder for people to afford thosem.
Even in fast fashion prices are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment.
Or: "Even in fast fashion, prices are incredibly high. . ."
However, the fashion industry not only gives people more jobs opportunities, but it is a way to express ourselves, just like any other form of art.
To sum up, I agree that fashion industry has more downsides than benefits, although, if handled goodproperly, it is an important tool in society
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I agree that the fashion industry has its positive and negative impacts. Through artistic expression, fashion designers push the limits of creativity which can set new trends. It pushes for new types of clothing that we can wear. However, in setting new trends and defining beauty standards, it leads to people who can't afford these new clothing trends to become socially outcasted. Unfortunately, not everyone can afford the newest, most stylish clothes on the market. These trends also only last a short amount of time before something new needs to come out. You'll often hear people on TV say, "Thoes shoes/dress/etc are SO last year." This seems wasteful to me because I prefer clothes to last a long time and can be worn for multiple occasions without the need to impress people.
Aug. 24, 2025
Thank you so much for the correction and for your opinion! :)
The fashion industry has a bad effect on people. YDo you agree?
You can use "you agree?" on its own in casual spoken English, but when writing (especially in a title, and especially in a piece structured like formal writing like this post), it's better to use the full sentence of "Do you agree?"
The fashion industry has become one of the most relevantimpactful aspects in our lives.
"impactful" is a little more natural of an adjective to use here
Gradually more people base their persona or job olity or their career in this field, but do its perks mask the bad effects?
"persona" is a rather scientific term, it's not really used in regular writing/speech.
I firmly believe that people give too much importance to this industry, besideseven disregarding the negative repercussions it has on society.
Firstly, the way you dress, style your hair or do your make up can impact on people's first impressions of you.
Multiple people, so multiple impressions
Moreover, the price of clothes is in constantly rising, making it harder for people to afford thosem.
Even in fast fashion prices are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment.
However, the fashion industry not only gives people more jobs opportunities, but it is a way to express ourselves, just like any other art.
"job opportunity" is a compound noun, you don't need to pluralise both parts seperately
To sum up, I agree that fashion industry has more downsides than benefits, although, if handled goodwell, it is an important tool in society
Aug. 23, 2025
Thank you so much! For the title I only wrote "You agree" because there weren't enough characters :)
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In my opinion, nowadays, we worship people's appearance more than their personality and that can stop us from knowing them better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In addition to this, look can change based on class, culture and personal taste, so it should not affect relationships. In addition to this, looks can change based on class, culture and personal taste, so it should not affect [our] relationships. |
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Even in fast fashion price are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment. Even in fast fashion prices are incredibly high, though the quality is low and they have a negative impact on the environment. Even Or: "Even in fast fashion, prices are incredibly high. . ." |
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