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The failed speech

Peter has a bitter memory of that event. Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell over his white new shirt stained it with sauce. He tried to *get across* the problem to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts. But, although Pete was *loath* at first, his colleague convinced him to clean the shirt in the bathroom. Peter using some soap. Peter didn't want people to *weigh up* his speech just for his appearance, so he tried it. Unfortunately, the stain didn't *went out* and besides the shirt was *creased*.


I write this text to use and learn new vocabulary (*words*). They are no related words, so the story may sound a bit strange in some cases.

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Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell overnto his new white new shirt and stained it with sauce.

Typically the word order would new before the color although it is correct either way. ‘and stained it…’ could be replaced by ‘, staining it…’

He tried to *get across* the problem *across* to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts.

Peter usinged some soap.

Peter didn't want people to *weigh upjudge* his speech just for his appearance, so he tried it.

Weigh up is not incorrect but would not typically be used in this sentence. Judge or assess would be more common. Weigh up is more commonly used for options or decisions.

Unfortunately, the stain didn't *wentcome out* and besides the shirt was *creased*.

The fFailed sSpeech

Peter has a bitter memory of that eventhis speech.

Before his speechgiving it, he was *guzzling* down canapes,és until one of them fell overnto his white new shirt and stained it with sauce.

He tried to *get across* the problem to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts with him.

But, aAlthough Pete was *loath*reluctant at first, his colleague instead convinced him to clean thehis shirt in the bathroom.

Since we talked about two shirts in the previous sentence, it's helpful to clarify which shirt he's cleaning

Peter usinged some soap.

PeterHe didn't want people to *weigh up*judge his speech just forbased on his appearance, so he tried ito remove the stain.

Unfortunately, the stain didn't *wentcome out* and besidesinstead the shirt was *creasbecame wrinkled*.

Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell overn his white new and shirt stained it with sauce.

fell over: person, fell on: thing fell on thing

He tried to *get across* the problem across to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts.

get <subject> across not get across <subject>

The failed speech


The fFailed sSpeech

Peter has a bitter memory of that event.


Peter has a bitter memory of that eventhis speech.

Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell over his white new shirt stained it with sauce.


Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell overn his white new and shirt stained it with sauce.

fell over: person, fell on: thing fell on thing

Before his speechgiving it, he was *guzzling* down canapes,és until one of them fell overnto his white new shirt and stained it with sauce.

Before his speech he was *guzzling* canapes, until one of them fell overnto his new white new shirt and stained it with sauce.

Typically the word order would new before the color although it is correct either way. ‘and stained it…’ could be replaced by ‘, staining it…’

He tried to *get across* the problem to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts.


He tried to *get across* the problem across to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts.

get <subject> across not get across <subject>

He tried to *get across* the problem to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts with him.

He tried to *get across* the problem *across* to one of his colleagues to switch their shirts.

But, although Pete was *loath* at first, his colleague convinced him to clean the shirt in the bathroom.


But, aAlthough Pete was *loath*reluctant at first, his colleague instead convinced him to clean thehis shirt in the bathroom.

Since we talked about two shirts in the previous sentence, it's helpful to clarify which shirt he's cleaning

Peter using some soap.


Peter usinged some soap.

Peter usinged some soap.

Peter didn't want people to *weigh up* his speech just for his appearance, so he tried it.


PeterHe didn't want people to *weigh up*judge his speech just forbased on his appearance, so he tried ito remove the stain.

Peter didn't want people to *weigh upjudge* his speech just for his appearance, so he tried it.

Weigh up is not incorrect but would not typically be used in this sentence. Judge or assess would be more common. Weigh up is more commonly used for options or decisions.

Unfortunately, the stain didn't *went out* and besides the shirt was *creased*.


Unfortunately, the stain didn't *wentcome out* and besidesinstead the shirt was *creasbecame wrinkled*.

Unfortunately, the stain didn't *wentcome out* and besides the shirt was *creased*.

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