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shu

March 5, 2022

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when do you usually book hotel rooms

I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website ,sometimes on app , rarely on phone call.
when it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room ,
because I go to business with my collegue most time.
sometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked a breakfast included hotel, or got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,
sometimes ,I was upset, I could only book a bed for sleeping

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wWhen do you usually book hotel rooms?

I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website , sometimes on an app , rarely on a phone call.

Great sentence! You can also say this more naturally, "I usually book hotel rooms for business trips online, and sometimes on an app, but rarely over the phone."

wWhen it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room , because I go on business trips with my colleague most of the time.

sSometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked ahave been lucky, and I have been able to book a hotel with breakfast included hotel, or I got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,.

Or you can also say, "Sometimes, I am lucky, and I can book a hotel that includes breakfast, or I am given a discount coupon to book the hotel." or, "Sometimes, I get lucky, and I am able to book a hotel with breakfast inclusive, or I get a discount coupon to book the hotel."

Have fun experimenting! :-)

sSometimes ,I was, I get upset, I couldbecause I can only book a bed for sleeping.

More naturally, "Sometimes, I'm disappointed, because I can only book a single bed in a shared room."

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shu

March 6, 2022

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Thank you very much .
I will practise more , I hope you keep helping

the experience booking hotel


the eMy Experience bBooking hHotels

when do you usually book hotel rooms


wWhen do you usually book hotel rooms?

I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website ,sometimes on app , rarely on phone call.


I usually book hotel rooms for business trips on the website , sometimes on an app , rarely on a phone call.

Great sentence! You can also say this more naturally, "I usually book hotel rooms for business trips online, and sometimes on an app, but rarely over the phone."

when it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room ,


wWhen it is for a business trip, I always book a twin room , because I go on business trips with my colleague most of the time.

because I go to business with my collegue most time.


sometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked a breakfast included hotel, or got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,


sSometimes, I was lucky ,I can booked ahave been lucky, and I have been able to book a hotel with breakfast included hotel, or I got a discount coupon to book the hotel ,.

Or you can also say, "Sometimes, I am lucky, and I can book a hotel that includes breakfast, or I am given a discount coupon to book the hotel." or, "Sometimes, I get lucky, and I am able to book a hotel with breakfast inclusive, or I get a discount coupon to book the hotel." Have fun experimenting! :-)

sometimes ,I was upset, I could only book a bed for sleeping


sSometimes ,I was, I get upset, I couldbecause I can only book a bed for sleeping.

More naturally, "Sometimes, I'm disappointed, because I can only book a single bed in a shared room."

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