Dec. 13, 2020
The Etiquette of Separation in a Loving Relationship
It seems that the art of loving is being gentle and meticulous more in the stage of unification in which you should win the beloved’s heart. The art of loving is the transcended form of the art of hunting, but love hunting. The lover walks around the beloved, dances, spreads his wings, and sings to attract her attention by displaying his beauty and persuade her to answer mutually. It appears that the way of seduction by humans and animals does not have the basic structural difference. The difference is in the ethics of love or it should be. In the realm of human relationships, haunting the beloved’s heart is just allowed under certain conditions. The human way of loving is the ethical one or it should be. However, I think the most important characteristic of human loving, loving within the domain of ethics, is not to behave properly in the stage of association but to behave properly in the stage of dissociation. At the time of winning the beloved’s heart, we are careful, cautious, and observant but at the time of separation, we tend to be rough, careless, and impolite- as if we do not see that the responsibility of being in love is not only limited to the time of being together but also on the occasion of separation. All of us know more or less that the experience of love is like the spring rain, it falls heavily but lasts shortly. But the wounds of love always stay with us. Most of the wounds that love engraves in our hearts are not because of separation per se but the way of separation. In a loving relationship, individuals open their hearts to each other and share their deepest secrets. However, this makes them extremely vulnerable- it looks like a castle that has deactivated its defense system and is defenseless against an enemy’s attacks. This extreme vulnerability makes love dangerous and at the time of separation leaves more deep wounds on individuals’ hearts. I think the most proper practice, at the time of the breakup, is that neither leaves the relationship without informing the other person first. The breakup should be step by step and with a mutual agreement. Two sides should give each other an opportunity to analyze, assess, and attempt to repair the relationship, and if it does not work, they should prepare the other person mentally for the breakup. And since being in love is kind of an addiction, in some cases, someone who is abandoned should overcome his or her addiction with the help of a psychologist and a circle of friends to avoid receiving more emotional harm. A good lover is not someone who knows how to win his beloved’s heart, a good lover is someone who knows how not to break her heart. Human love is more like the art of consolation than the art of seduction.
The Etiquette of Separation in a Loving Relationship
The art of loving is the transcendan evolved form of the art of hunting, but love huntinghunting for love.
The lover walks around the beloved, dances, spreads his wings, and sings to attract her attention by displaying his beauty and persuades her to answer mutually.
Or "persuading," depending on your exact meaning.
It appears that the way of seduction byof humans and that of animals does not have theany difference in basic structural difference.
The difference is in the ethics of love, or if not, it should be in the ethics of love.
"If not" is not strictly necessary, but without it, we have to find a way to emphasize "should." Otherwise, it sounds strange.
In the realm of human relationships, haunting the beloved’s heart is justonly allowed under certain conditions.
The human way of loving is the ethical one, or if not, it should be the ethical one.
However, I think the most important characteristic of human loving, loving within the domain of ethics, is not to behave properlyproper behavior in the stage of association but to behave properlyproper behavior in the stage of dissociation.
At the time of winning the beloved’s heart, we are careful, cautious, and observant, but at the time of separation, we tend to be rough, careless, and impolite- as if we do not see that the responsibility of being in love is not only limited to the time of being together but extends also ton the occasion of separation.
The repeated verb is "limited," so it doesn't make sense to reuse it with "the occasion of separation."
All of us know more or less that the experience of love is like the spring rain,: it falls heavily but lasts shortlyfor a short time.
But the wounds of love always stay with us.
Most of the wounds that love engraves in our hearts are not because of separation per se but the way of separation.
In a loving relationship, individuals open their hearts to each other and share their deepest secrets.
However, this makes them extremely vulnerable- it lookis like a castle that has deactivated its defense system and is defenseless against an enemy’s attacks.
This extreme vulnerability makes love dangerous, and at the time of separation, it leaves more deep wounds on individuals’ hearts.
I think the most proper practice, at the time of the breakup, is that neither leaves the relationship without informing the other person first.
The breakup should be step -by -step and with a mutual agreement.
Two sides should give each other an opportunity to analyze, assess, and attempt to repair the relationship, and if it does not work, they should prepare the other person mentally for the breakup.
And since being in love is kind of an addiction, in some cases, someone who ishas been abandoned should overcome his or her addiction with the help of a psychologist and a circle of friends to avoid receiving more emotional harm.
The logic doesn't seem entirely consistent. "Being in love is a kind of addiction" suggests someone who gets into a lot of ill-fated relationships, not necessarily just someone who has been abandoned.
A good lover is not someone who knows how to win his beloved’s heart,; a good lover is someone who knows how not to break her heart.
Human love is more like the art of consolation than the art of seduction.
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This text is very long (483 words), so you should probably break it up into paragraphs! Long paragraphs aren't unusual in more formal writing or in literary writing, but they generally should not take up an entire single-spaced page (which is about 500 words). Even starting a new paragraph after the introduction, once you get into the topic of break-ups, would help.
Dec. 22, 2020
And since being in love is kind of an addiction, in some cases, someone who ishas been abandoned should overcome his or her addiction with the help of a psychologist and a circle of friends to avoid receiving more emotional harm.
No, I meant the whole process of loving is a kind of addiction not only ill-fated loving relationships in your own words. I expressed a famous view that I think there is some truth to it but I do not quite agree with this theory. I think you found it inconsistent because of my previous statements. I meant we could reduce the harms of separation with proper behavior but nobody can completely avoid the pain. As long as you desire something and someone taking away these precious things and people will cause pain.
Dec. 22, 2020
I’m really grateful for your correction. I thought nobody was going to correct it. And thank you for your advice. I’ll keep it in mind.
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The Etiquette of Separation in a Loving Relationship This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It seems that the art of loving is being gentle and meticulous more in the stage of unification in which you should win the beloved’s heart. |
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The art of loving is the transcended form of the art of hunting, but love hunting. The art of loving is |
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The lover walks around the beloved, dances, spreads his wings, and sings to attract her attention by displaying his beauty and persuade her to answer mutually. The lover walks around the beloved, dances, spreads his wings, and sings to attract her attention by displaying his beauty and persuades her to answer mutually. Or "persuading," depending on your exact meaning. |
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It appears that the way of seduction by humans and animals does not have the basic structural difference. It appears that the |
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The difference is in the ethics of love or it should be. The difference is in the ethics of love, or if not, it should be in the ethics of love. "If not" is not strictly necessary, but without it, we have to find a way to emphasize "should." Otherwise, it sounds strange. |
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In the realm of human relationships, haunting the beloved’s heart is just allowed under certain conditions. In the realm of human relationships, haunting the beloved’s heart is |
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The human way of loving is the ethical one or it should be. The human way of loving is the ethical one, or if not, it should be the ethical one. |
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However, I think the most important characteristic of human loving, loving within the domain of ethics, is not to behave properly in the stage of association but to behave properly in the stage of dissociation. However, I think the most important characteristic of human loving, loving within the domain of ethics, is not |
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At the time of winning the beloved’s heart, we are careful, cautious, and observant but at the time of separation, we tend to be rough, careless, and impolite- as if we do not see that the responsibility of being in love is not only limited to the time of being together but also on the occasion of separation. At the time of winning the beloved’s heart, we are careful, cautious, and observant, but at the time of separation, we tend to be rough, careless, and impolite- as if we do not see that the responsibility of being in love is not only limited to the time of being together but extends also to The repeated verb is "limited," so it doesn't make sense to reuse it with "the occasion of separation." |
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All of us know more or less that the experience of love is like the spring rain, it falls heavily but lasts shortly. All of us know more or less that the experience of love is like the spring rain |
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But the wounds of love always stay with us. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of the wounds that love engraves in our hearts are not because of separation per se but the way of separation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In a loving relationship, individuals open their hearts to each other and share their deepest secrets. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, this makes them extremely vulnerable- it looks like a castle that has deactivated its defense system and is defenseless against an enemy’s attacks. However, this makes them extremely vulnerable- it |
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This extreme vulnerability makes love dangerous and at the time of separation leaves more deep wounds on individuals’ hearts. This extreme vulnerability makes love dangerous, and at the time of separation, it leaves more deep wounds on individuals’ hearts. |
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I think the most proper practice, at the time of the breakup, is that neither leaves the relationship without informing the other person first. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The breakup should be step by step and with a mutual agreement. The breakup should be step |
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Two sides should give each other an opportunity to analyze, assess, and attempt to repair the relationship, and if it does not work, they should prepare the other person mentally for the breakup. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And since being in love is kind of an addiction, in some cases, someone who is abandoned should overcome his or her addiction with the help of a psychologist and a circle of friends to avoid receiving more emotional harm. And since being in love is kind of The logic doesn't seem entirely consistent. "Being in love is a kind of addiction" suggests someone who gets into a lot of ill-fated relationships, not necessarily just someone who has been abandoned. |
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A good lover is not someone who knows how to win his beloved’s heart, a good lover is someone who knows how not to break her heart. A good lover is not someone who knows how to win his beloved’s heart |
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Human love is more like the art of consolation than the art of seduction. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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