July 10, 2025
The eternity of sky
Sometimes I’m finding myself in a situation where I think about the sky. I’m just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it comes to me really interesting because I can only see the color blue. It’s not just only about the layer it’s about moon, stars, sun and more. Our existences are really small and short one day all of us will die and we will blend with the sky i suppose.
Bazen kendimi gökyüzünü düşünürken buluyorum. Ben sadece gökyüzüne bakıyorum ve oradaki tabakayı hayal etmeye çalışıyorum ve bu bana gerçekten ilginç geliyor çünkü ben sadece oradaki mavi rengini görebiliyorum. Bu sadece tabakayla alakalı değil bu aynı zamanda ay, yıldızlar,güneş ve fazlasıyla alakalı. Bizim varoluşumuz gerçekten çok küçük ve kısa bir gün hepimiz öleceğiz ve sanırım gökyüzüyle karışacağız.
It’s not just only about the layer, it’s about mthe Moon, stars, sSun and more.
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Our existences are really small and short o. One day all of us will die and we will blend with the sky i, I suppose.
The eternity of sky
Sometimes I’m finding myself in a situation where I think about the sky.
I’m just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it comes to me really interesting because I can only see the color blue.
I'm just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it is really interesting because I can only see the color blue.
It’s not just only about the layer it’s about moon, stars, sun and more.
it's not just only about the layer, it's about the moon, stars, sun and more.
Our existences are really small and short one day all of us will die and we will blend with the sky i suppose.
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Our existence is very small and short. One day all of us will die and we will blend with the sky I suppose.
The eEternity of sSky
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Sometimes I’m finding myself in a situations where I (think about/contemplate) the sky.
More natural.
"Contemplate" would be a great word to use here. It's when we are deep in thought about something, like in a profound way. Very appropriate for an existential context.
I’m just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there, and it comes to me's really interesting to me because I can only see the color blue.
Looking at the sky is an activity you sometimes do, so use "I find myself / I look up" rather than the "I am finding/looking" which are describing what you are actively doing in the moment. It could be used to tell the story about yourself from the viewpoint of currently performing these activities, but that's not really what's happening here.
It’s not (just /only) about the sky layer; it’s about the moon, stars, sun and more.
Just or only work here, but both is too much.
Our existences are really small and short o. One day, all of us will die and we will blend with the sky i, I suppose.
"I" is always capitalized
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Sometimes I’m finding myself in a situation where I think about the sky. Sometimes I More natural. "Contemplate" would be a great word to use here. It's when we are deep in thought about something, like in a profound way. Very appropriate for an existential context. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it comes to me really interesting because I can only see the color blue. I Looking at the sky is an activity you sometimes do, so use "I find myself / I look up" rather than the "I am finding/looking" which are describing what you are actively doing in the moment. It could be used to tell the story about yourself from the viewpoint of currently performing these activities, but that's not really what's happening here. I’m just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it comes to me really interesting because I can only see the color blue. I'm just looking up and trying to imagine that there is a layer up there and it is really interesting because I can only see the color blue. |
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